Tangles & Ties: Chapter 90: The Break

Thank you for all the love, patience, support & motivation. I know these parts are tough to handle but these are as difficult for me as they are for you. Thanks for understanding.

Loads of love to you…

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“Manik… I can’t live with you… You have broken my faith in this relationship!”

Manik’s smile was already lost long back, but it became painful to bear when she began telling him how hurt she had been. He was aware that he had hurt her but didn’t know that it was to this extent that she wouldn’t want to give him another chance.

Her final sentence shook him deeply. He held her arms just below her shoulders and unintentionally pressing them hard, he drew her closer to him, almost a bit higher on her toes. She didn’t shy away from staring right back at him, with her chin lifted up.

He murmured, “If I am messy with relationships, then what are you? I don’t allow people to come close to me and push them away… and you… you allow people too quickly, even strangers to come close to you but if they are not up to your mark, you cut them off completely. Aren’t we the same?”

“No… Manik, I don’t dump people. I am not the one to do that. But when someone wants to walk out of my life or asks me to go, I make it easy for them. What do you expect me to do? Beg to stay? I can’t do that.”

“Right!” He sighed, nodding with a tense look on his face, “I’ll do that! I will beg you to stay.”

“You don’t need to do that, either,” She said, “Because this is not how it works. My self- respect is not so shallow that it would want to see you on knees… my ego doesn’t want to defeat you in any game making me happy that you pleaded and begged and so I stayed back.”

He huffed and winced with a pained look in his eyes, and said, “Then what? What exactly do you want me to do? I apologised. You said that you forgive me, understand me but you are not willing to live with me… I am willing to keep apologising, but you said that you don’t want me to do that… I am ready to be punished in any way that you want… but you don’t want that too…and now that I am pleading before you to rethink about leaving, you don’t want that either…so what exactly do you want…Trust me. I’ll do that. Just say it!!”

She was in tears. She nodded, “I don’t know. I’m too shattered to think clearly. I don’t want you to do anything. Just stay true to who you are… don’t explain… don’t stop me when I go…that’s what you do, right?”

His eyes were reddened and fiery when he spoke in low, deliberate and determined words, “Don’t tell me what I do and what I don’t. I haven’t followed any pattern with you, ever… why will I do it now?? And when I’ve said before that I will follow you to the end of the world, then trust me, I’ll do that.”

She held his hands and tore them away from her making him leave her. Moving her tongue over her dried lips she said, “Okay! And I might stop if you do that… you can make me stay back… you can make me live with you… but what is the use when you cannot make me believe in ‘us’ all over again? You can never make me trust you as purely as before. You can never make me feel secure about us. I had invested all my love… all my faith in this marriage and you… I gave it everything I had… and now, it broke. I will always live in a fear that after one serious fight, you will ask me to leave… I will always be scared to speak before you, thinking that it might hurt you, and may lead to the breaking of this relationship… I will be struggling to maintain our marriage and you will do that too… we will eventually fall in the trap that most of the arranged marriages are usually in… they are mostly concerned about maintaining the marriage… they were all chosen by their parents, so they have to maintain the farce… do you think it is worth it? Because… I don’t think so…”

He knew that he had hurt her and was ready to suffer pain in return, he had apologised and was willing to do it again and again, he could live in remorse till she forgave him and he could suffer anything that came in the way of their love… but he didn’t want her to go away from him, for only he knew that he didn’t mean even a word of what he had spoken in an outburst of anger. He didn’t even know what he was saying when he spoke. It hurt him more when she repeated it that he had asked her to leave. And now, her pain was difficult for him to endure for he loved her more than anything. He couldn’t see her in this agony.

He grimaced, unable to think of any words to pacify her. He said, “Wow! Do you seriously believe in what you are speaking?”

“Yes!” She nodded, not even trying to hold her tears, “This marriage was a mistake. We don’t even know each other properly. We shouldn’t have agreed for this marriage. We shouldn’t go for an arranged marriage when we were not prepared to accept the flaws and weaknesses that come as a package with all the good traits of a person. In love marriage, at least you know what you are getting into. It’s ‘us’ who choose a partner in love marriage and not our parents.”

He pressed his lips for a second and couldn’t find any semblance in this Nandini and the one he knew a day before who understood him like the back of her hand. Suddenly she had distanced so much that it felt she was light years away from him and they didn’t connect at any level. So much for one outburst.

Deeply saddened, he asked, “Does that mean, if it wasn’t an arranged marriage and we would have met in other circumstances, if you knew me otherwise, you wouldn’t have chosen me?”

She took a moment as her jaw stiffened and face had a toughened look. She finally whispered in a low breaking voice, “Never!”

“Great!” He murmured, almost to himself, unable to believe that things had gone down so badly. He closed his eyes, but he didn’t speak anything after that.

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They got a call from Manoj that Latika was now conscious. She was aware of what had happened. Nandini, Manik, Gaurvi, and Trisha reached the hospital to be around her.

Nandini talked to the doctor and after taking all the details of the treatment given, she went to the room that Latika was shifted to, after initial treatment at the Emergency Room. Inside the room, Latika was on the bed and Manik was sitting on a chair beside her, holding her hand.

“I’m sorry,” Latika said in a frail, broken voice, first looking at Manik and then she looked at the girls and Manoj.

Manik didn’t say anything. He simply held her hand strongly, grasped between his palms and took it near his cheek, lowering his face while his tears dropped. Nandini couldn’t see him like that. He was lost and shattered himself and didn’t know what to say. He had no words for this moment.

Gaurvi and Trisha sat on the other side of Latika. Trisha complained, “Mom, you didn’t think about me? Why did you do it.”

Latika didn’t reply. Manoj went near her and nodded, “It’s all my fault. I should have been more invested. I didn’t realise your self-medication could be this dangerous…”

Latika wept and closed her eyes, “I’m so weak. Even a small problem appears like a mountain…”

“Don’t worry. We are with you…” Gaurvi sat on her bed.

Nandini was at the entrance of the room, heavy-hearted as she witnessed the entire family trying to cheer up and support Latika. Slowly, she stepped out and left them alone to deal with this crisis. She couldn’t decide if she should go inside and console her mother-in-law. She was still considered an outsider and it was her first major interaction with them. She didn’t want to disturb the harmony that could develop at this time. Her presence had the chance that Latika would go on a recoil, defensive mode.

So she left them and went back to the doctor to ask about Dr. Sarkar. Dr. Sarkar was on his rounds and was informed about Latika’s state. He messaged them that he will reach in an hour and talk to Latika in detail.

Relieved, Nandini left the hospital and went to attend her duties at her own hospital. After that, she was busy for the entire day, in OPD, OT, ward rounds, post op…

It felt weird not to receive Manik’s phone or message for the entire day. He was with his family at the time of an emergency, taking care of them and being with them, so it was justified that he didn’t get time to call or send her a message. But she knew that it wasn’t just that… the main reason was that she had asked him not to keep calling her or contacting her.

She didn’t call him or message him, either.

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By evening, when she reached back home, Manik and his two sisters were having dinner.

“Bhabhi, please come and eat with us,” Trisha asked her.

Manik raised his eyes to look at her but didn’t speak anything. Nandini nodded and smiled, “I’m not hungry, Trish.”

Gaurvi stood up, took her bag and placed it on the sofa and made Nandini sit on one of the chairs, “Sit and eat something. Bhai has made dinner. He didn’t let me cook and Trisha… toh, you know… knows nothing!”

Gaurvi giggled with that. Trisha winced, “See, everyone is always teasing me.”

Nandini took a plate and said, “You are the youngest, na… and you are studying… so you are excused from household work. Even I didn’t know how to cook when we were just married.”

“Really!” Trisha chirped, “At least, someone is with me.”

“Everyone is only pampering you, all the time!” Manik said, “Stop complaining like a baby. And… you have exams next month, na…stop worrying about mom and everyone else and start reading.”

Trisha nodded, “Okay, that reminds me…Bhai, the CAT forms are out… can you give me your laptop for some time, I need to see the details.”

“Yeah… take it. And send me the link too…” Manik said.

“I need some books. I had to buy from Delhi, anyway.”

“Come with me to market tomorrow.” Manik assured her, “I’ll buy you.”

Gaurvi turned to Nandini, “Thank you so much, Bhabhi. Your promptness saved mom’s life.”

“Nahi di… it’s just…” Nandini tried to say something to avoid taking the credit but Gaurvi insisted.

“No, I’m serious. We all knew mom…how she had temper tantrums… how she was always cranky about things, she had mood swings so abnormal that we would wonder what happened to her. She lashed out on everyone. But we tolerated because we were family and thought that giving her attention will solve her problems. But it increased them… I’m scared to imagine, what would have happened if you hadn’t intervened in time.”

“She had to be saved… I was just the medium. To think of it, I was the reason too…” Nandini said.

“No, you were not the reason. Last two times, you were not there na…still it happened. It’s not about you. It’s ‘her’… and us too. We are more responsible for her state. She never took medicines on time, took papa’s medicines… ignored her sudden unreasonable demands… we were all responsible.”

Nandini simply smiled. Her eyes were turned to Manik who was looking at her keenly. He had gratitude and apology in his eyes.

Nandini said, “Manik, ma took all of papa’s tablets. I guess we need to take care of his medicines too. I’ve told the doctor at the hospital to measure his BP and other routine tests and then advise medicines. But once ma gets discharged, you need to see to it.”

“Hmm!” He nodded, agreeing to her and not knowing what else to say.

When the girls went inside their room to sleep, Manik turned to Nandini, who was in the kitchen, taking care of the leftovers.

He walked hesitatingly and when he started speaking, “Nandini…err…”

She stopped him, “Manik, please don’t say anything.”

“You can listen to me, at least.”

She straightened after adjusting the ceramic bowl of dal in the fridge, “What will you say? You will apologise… you will ask me to talk to you… you will request me to stay back…right?? Do you have anything new?”

He nodded to refuse, taking his lips in. She spoke on a choked throat, hurting badly, “Then, please don’t say anything. I don’t want to hear it all over again and feel bad for myself and for you too.”

She crossed him to go out when he said, “Let me know what will it take to convince you to give me a second chance.”

She stopped and turned to look at him. He was more drained and tired than yesterday. This changing scenario was new to him and he didn’t know how to cope. Nandini had seen emergencies and crisis closely during her work. She knew how to handle a lot of things at hand when racing against time. But it might not be the same who hardly ever manages an emergency. And it showed on his face, how helpless he was. He was not getting enough time to talk to her and that disturbed him. He was not able to apologise the way he wanted to… She knew about his deadlines at the office and now that he was on leave suddenly, his opponents must be very happy. They must be calling him every day and he was not able to go. It must be a huge stress. His job was already stressful and now, Trisha’s books, papa’s medicines, Gaurvi’s nutrition, mom’s hospital care were added responsibilities…

Nandini could feel his pain. She said, “Do you want me to help you? I mean – I’m taking Gaurvi di for a scan tomorrow to my hospital. Do you want me to take Trisha to market for books and get papa’s medicines checked – I can do that!”

“No!” He sighed, “I didn’t talk to you because I wanted you to take my responsibilities. I can manage them. I wanted to talk to you about ‘us’…”

She pressed her lips and lowered her eyes to look at the floor. Then, she folded her hands and leaned by the doorjamb, speaking after a long moment, “Manik, please don’t push me…”

He walked close to her and hesitatingly held her face in his hands. When she didn’t oppose him, he lifted it up to look at her. Her eyes were moist and red. He could hear his heart beating hard at the way she was crying like a baby. He could hardly speak, but he tried, “Nandu… you only said that it is a marriage and not a joke. This relationship is not so fickle to be ended like that… so easily… and now, you are giving up?”

She spoke between her hiccups, “You gave up, first! I am just unable to tolerate it… in fact, unable to believe it.”

In a tired, depressed voice, he said, “I am an idiot. I’ve always been… you know that! But you also know that I have been open with you like I have never been to anyone before. I felt so hurt that day because you are the only one who knew me inside out, I’ve shared so much with you like I haven’t with anyone else… I felt exposed… I felt destroyed… so I shouted… I regretted falling in love that made me so vulnerable that someone could use my secrets and hurt me… you have always been so understanding… then why are you not trying to understand today?”

“I understand. That is why I didn’t stomp out the very same moment when you asked me to leave. That is why I am still here, waiting for your mom to be discharged. That is why  we are still talking…”

“Can we give it another chance? Please?”

She pressed her lips and didn’t reply for a long moment. Then she said, almost breaking down, “I’m not sure.”

“Then, what do you want?”

“Let’s take a break. Stay away from each other and then decide, if we really want to be together…”

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88 Comments Add yours

  1. Part 91 – I still feel nandini was stretching it long. They could have talked and resolved the issue. I was worried when manik was so much into her and not to separate her. he was literally begging her but she was too adamant to even listen to him.
    And then manik the manipulator came. I was thinking why manik was so lagged behind in his ways. He bounced back and scratched her every way of staying away from each other. it shocked me, like nandini, when he talked about divorce. It was his way to give a shock and make her think about her solution of break up. He very nicely explained each aspect about break up, living separate or divorce. And his final stroke was mind-blowing. His offer which he made before their marriage which she gladly accepted that time.
    It was alright at that time when they were not in love or not went ahead in their marriage. And it will be difficult to follow those rules when you actually know each other very well. It will be interesting to see how they live under one roof as strangers. So now it’s really all ties are tangled. Waiting for more. Sorry for the late comment.

    Madhuri53

    1. sorry wrong place

  2. piya66 says:

    Di will you update after 1 o’clock ?

  3. di update is not visible anywhere

    1. Manita V says:

      I haven’t updated. I will update by 12

      1. gauti reshsha says:

        Waiting di…just can’t sleep… curiosity killing me…

  4. Anonymous says:

    Nandini is just too perfect…

  5. Anonymous says:

    Are you updating today ?

    1. Manita V says:

      Yes… by 12

  6. Tanusree Saha says:

    Di will you update today?

    1. Manita V says:

      Around 12 o’clock

      1. Tanusree Saha says:

        Thank you so much 💞

      2. gauti reshsha says:

        Yippeyyyyyyy ancing in joy🐒🐒🐒🐒

  7. divyanshi gaur says:

    Di will you update today

    1. Manita V says:

      No, I will update tomorrow

      1. someone16sh says:

        🙁

      2. gauti reshsha says:

        Ok di..tc..gn

  8. Anonymous says:

    Nice one

  9. Ann Aysh says:

    But in a relationship everyone needs second chance na.. Nandu should not be so harsh on manik. Bcoz more dan any one she knws him inside out

  10. Anonymous says:

    This is going to get really complicated. Since both manik n nandini are opposites and neither of the two can do anything to undo what has happened. Once a knot is broken.. it is mended but not completely as it was before.lets see how things turn out.

  11. Nice but i want them back together manik should put effort to monafy nandu in different ways becoz everytine nandu put effort not manik these time he should do something wh8ch he never does for her

  12. pavanirr says:

    Thank u so much di for this amazing update , this story is so realistic that sometimes I forget this is a story I keep on thinking about this and try to analyse from their pov, and imagine about my future what I am going to do in this kind of situations. Coming to the story I feel this break is necessary for them to know the importance of each other in their lives as they are together since their marriage , even when they are fighting they lived under same roof (we get to know the importance of people when they are not with us). So, I want to see both of them to get through this situation and be strong enough to overcome all hurdles in their lives.

  13. obliviatex_ says:

    I didn’t see this coming and now im sure by this break they will realise how much they can’t ‘stay away from each other’. as always nice chapter it was! Can’t wait to read further ❤❤

  14. chandrasan says:

    Thankuu so much for regular updates 😍❤ feels like good old days are back!!when we used to get back to back updates and reading it morning as the first thing💕❤❤

  15. Anonymous says:

    in anger you don’t know at what extent you hurt a person. everyone should learn from this.

  16. Part 90 – Feeling really bad for manik. He was so much trying to fix by any way could and she was not at all listening. I think she is taking too extreme step. Every marriage be it love or arranged have these types of fights or crisis. That doesn’t mean they should break-up. I totally disagree with her about her view about love marriages. In love marriage also such things can happen even though you know each other very well. Most of the times you only fall for that person seeing good side of that person. In love marriage such sides shows little later b’coss you already know adjustments with that person but in arrange marriages you learn that every day as per circumstances arises.
    She was hurt, badly hurt but not giving second chance is not the solution. What if she does such mistake then….will she expect him to do the same, break marriage and go separate ways.
    If you are in love with you husband then you each & every possible thing to save your marriage. And he is doing the same. She can take time but leaving him cannot be solution. What will they say to his or her parents about separation?
    She so much understand him that she thought about his impending expenses, office stress and coping things bet family and his office. But still she was not ready to give him a chance. What about her love for him? Can she able to unlove him so easily? Will he agree to take a break from their relationship?

    Madhuri53

    1. chandrasan says:

      She is not breaking the marriage, she never said that. She clearly said to take a break so that they will realize their love towards each other whether they want to be together or not. She love him that is y she is still there with him, giving him the shoulder to cry on and giving that moral support. He cant get away with his harsh words, if she forgive her now will he learn something ? will he control his words next time, dont you think that he will take her for granted and will do same things . She has been understanding everytime and its important for anyone to stand up for themselves. If she needs assurance from him that he wont repeat this stunt in future then break is the best thing to do..

  17. chandrasan says:

    I am loving this track and would like to see them missing each other. One such example is them messaging each other❤😭

  18. chandrasan says:

    What a honest and straight forward conversation ❤❤ nandini is so clear and she is doing this only for good. I hope this break brings best out of manan and manik❣

  19. Puspita Das says:

    Felt for Manik but can’t ignore the pain Nandini going through . Awesome update.

  20. rajirath says:

    Again an awesome chapter!! Gets better everyday!!
    Coming to this chapter I felt bad more for Manik than Nandhini bcoz Nandhini knows Manik’s past and how bad he is at relationships . Also she herself has said that every person is a package of good and bad. She understands him,feels bad for him and loves him but not forgive him ??.( I know manik shouldn’t have said those words to her). Now I feel that Nandhini needs to learn a few things like
    This is what marriage does to you.
    Throws you in difficult situations and tests you.

    She also had said that you have to look at people behind the words ( when manik asked her to shut up in the plane and apologized).
    So it looks like to me that they both need to understand and work hard for them to be together to face all tides.

    Can’t wait to see what happens next. Life lessons for the readers too. Thank you Manita.

  21. kshamaapurva says:

    Speechless…….take a break by staying in same house…. 😆. MaNan cannot stay without each other. Fright with each other….outbrust…..just be together 😀

  22. Anonymous says:

    The last line reminds me of Spark and Spice .
    I’m so pumped up to see how the story progresses further as MaNan cannot stay away from each other for long .

  23. It really hurt to see Manik so helpless when Nandini said she would have never chosen him for her just like it was painful to see Nandini shattered when Manik said he regretted falling for her. Things don’t come easy in a relationship..it always has to be a balance. Nandini is a person who is easy with words and knows how to handle situations while for Manik all of this is too new. Being an introvert has it’s own problems and I for a fact know how difficult it is to express how you feel when you are an introvert and Manik is going through the same phase. He is more hurt than Nandini because somewhere he knows that he loves her endlessly and he is the reason of the growing distance between them but I can’t blame Nandini either cuz she is also right at her place. Hope this break sorts everything between them and they realise they are incomplete without each other.

  24. kalpana devi says:

    Awesome update. I hope this break will make them these two bring together more. I m waiting for lathika’s reaction towards nandhini.

  25. Bidisha Mohanty says:

    It’s hurts so much when the people you love are in pain.But this is needed,for both of them.They both need to realise that marriage can’t be taken for granted.Am feeling so so so bad for Manik but the sadist in me badly wants the break between the two.

    1. Manita V says:

      hahaha… yeah, Manik is in pain…but so is she…
      they need to learn how not to take people for granted 🙂

      1. Anonymous says:

        but its good — manik needs to feel this pain, Then only can he fix it — he needs to realize the extent of the pain that he caused her, then he can try to understand and fix they situation. And this time i think its Manik’s responsibility to fix it. Beautiful and wonderfully emotional update. I love how you showed how hurt they both were.

  26. Ruchi says:

    Nice update..I read it in office in such a hurry…I felt so bad for Manik when Nandini said she would have never chosen him for her 🙁 ..hope this break does them some good 🙂 and Manik is able to open up to her better..I guess that will happen automatically as he opens up to his family as well 🙂

    1. Manita V says:

      It is very necessary for them to realise that they fell in love with each other and not to a statue chosen by their parents… they need to find that love back… this time just for themselves…

  27. PriyankaM11 says:

    I so knew this will happen staying away will be the only solution for Nandini.. But when it’s actually happening,it hurts.
    I know when Manik says those hurtful words he shouldn’t have said that. But here when Nandu agreed to Manik that she won’t have

    1. PriyankaM11 says:

      Choose him that hurts too.. It’s like both are on the same boat hurting at the same time. But this break will seriously help them to think about what exactly they want. I hope Nandu won’t drag this so far.
      Sometimes I feel soo bad for Manik. When we feel guilty and the opposite one doesn’t listen to anything of us , it hurts more.
      You are just excellent Di.. From the start to end I was reading each and every word holding my breath. Was so close to cry out loud but controlled myself. You always put me in situation like this. You describe every emotion so perfectly that it feels like it’s happening with us only.
      Eagerly waiting for Manik’s reaction.
      Good Night Di.
      Stay blessed. 💫
      Ps- mistakenly clicked the send button and the comment got posted so now completing my chant here in this reply.

      1. Manita V says:

        No problem… I read them both together…
        thank you and love you

        1. PriyankaM11 says:

          💖💖

  28. stelitoes11 says:

    Every emotion is beautifully written loved it

    1. Manita V says:

      Thank you

  29. sumaia sara says:

    Okey it really hurt when Nandu said she would never had choose him for her,Manik really having hard time to explain his position it happen with introvert people who isn’t good in explaining but I still waiting for him to open up to her and make her believe in him and them soon.

    1. Manita V says:

      Thank you for understanding him. He is introvert and already he is speaking more than his capacity.
      Explanations dont come easy to him.

      1. Anonymous says:

        that’s so true – explanations don’t come easy. But these are skills one must learn to have a healthy relationship right. It’ll just take some time

  30. Anonymous says:

    Super, amazing it’s good decision for both. Like I feel short of words much love….

    1. Manita V says:

      Thank you 🙂

  31. Aashna says:

    i can feel each and every emotions you are so grt…when i was reading the last line i could feel blood rushing inside me…u r an awsm writer💕💕💕💕

    1. Manita V says:

      So sweet of you! I’m blessed that readers are able to connect.
      Lots of love

  32. Unnati Limbachiya says:

    Nandu idea was true lovely update I it’s very difficult situation I hope they soon come back

    1. Manita V says:

      They will…they have to…

  33. Sudha Tammana says:

    Nandu has taken the right decision and life is like everything falls on our head at once and gets solved also like that we have to keep patience strength . Loved gaurvi she is very mature

    1. Manita V says:

      True…. when problems arise, we learn to deal with them too… that is how we learn

  34. Deepa says:

    Ek achchhi bat hui ki nandini ne sahi tarika nikala hai is separation ko rokne ka. Manik bhi agree ho jaye. Nandini ko time lagega is hurtful situation se Bahar nikalne me aur manik ko bhi apna comfort zone chhodna padega agar use nandini ke sath fir se pyar se aur understanding se rahena ho to. I m happy with this track di thank you so much

    1. Manita V says:

      Thank you dear. I’m glad you loved the track!

  35. Madhuri says:

    Reminds me of FRIENDS Rachael and Ross😜

  36. Diviya says:

    It’s hurt to see manan like this but update was amazing loving it and I think nanduu idea was good and so excited for upcoming events❤️💗

  37. Aasma says:

    Gonna comment inabit x

    1. Aasma says:

      Okay firstly the last update I had no idea you uploaded, I check a few times and nothing was there but anyways I read it and this damnnn nandini is hurt badly! I don’t blame her at all for what’s she’s doing but then again I don’t really blame manik, I know in the heat of the moments things are said which you don’t believe but he’s regretting it now, let’s see how they come out this!

      Your stories always have ups and downs that’s why I love them them they keep me entertained loooiol

      Love you
      😚

      1. Manita V says:

        Thank you Aasma for your never-ending support!

      2. Anonymous says:

        but even in the heat of the moment, most married couples know that they should never go so far as to mention separation – that’s like serious business, not something you can just say when you’re upset.

    2. gauti reshsha says:

      Awesome i checked n number of times and thought we were not getting update…but finally you will never fail to disappoint us…tada the update was there…u always amaze me the way you write..but here i am getting little pissed with Nandini that she herself knows it was an outburst of anger what Manik spurt out and he never meant what he told her..being an introvert he’s still trying to explain his stand and now i feel she’s being stubborn here and i feel he’s so emotionally drained and tried best to explain his situation..feeling pity for him..what does she mean by taking a break saying seperately in the same house or totally cut off..i didn’t understand that di..just loving the track…its just my emotions on Nandini character portrayal and no offence to you di..love you loads…you are fantabulous as always..waiting for your reply..😄

      1. Manita V says:

        I don’t take offence on me… so chill 😀

        Regarding Nandini, you can call her stubborn, but I call her strong that despite loving Manik so much, she is not giving up… if she doesn’t behave strong right now, she will be facing this every day and Manik will speak shit in his outbursts…

        (what Latika is doing to people who tolerate her… and what hundreds of women face everyday when they take abuse and disrespect in any form… he has to repent and show her that he won’t let this relationship break easily)

        1. gauti reshsha says:

          I think u got upset di..i am sorry..i dunno what.. always have a feeling that i am bipolar too..as yesterday i was feeling bad for Nandini and today for Manik..

        2. Anonymous says:

          exactly — well said !! its time for him to hold his end of the string that ties this relationship

  38. lovelyrashu says:

    Superb update and I really did felt bad for manik being a alone son of the family its like all the problems have fallen on his shoulders and apart from that professional commitment and competitors sword is all ready on his neck. I don’t know why but I really felt that just like manik this time nandini is being impulsive too or she wants to see that till what length will manik go to save their relationship, if she was really serious about leaving then as manik said its marriage and not a joke to be separated that easily. Taking a break is great decision atleast it’s better than separation in a instance. And for the first time from starting till now I liked Gauri very much for behaving mature as per her age. Hope this break doesn’t include nandini leaving to her maternal place.

  39. dipalint says:

    I faced this kind of situations on frequent basis. But know i know what it feel like to be stay on your words, and how important it is to be keep distance in this kind of situation.

  40. pixiepari says:

    I feel like crying but i cant..its so frustrating yet cant stop myself from reading it further…my heart pains for manik but i can understand nandu…i. Can feel her pain…i am soo messed up diii

    1. Manita V says:

      Relax… things will get better soon… they are still together 🙂

  41. Harshita singh says:

    It hurt too much to see manik and nandini like this.. I really want to see manik mom reaction towards nandini, still she treat her as strange or she accept nandini as her daughter in law..?? Let’s hope that this break turn into something good for both of them.. Both of them are suffering in their own way.. Hope this break made their relations strong enough.

  42. krinal310 says:

    You made me cry dii ..i think that break will be good for both of them,let them know their worth and need in each other’s life and i am sure they will be back together 💕

  43. Azania25 says:

    Speechless… that what I feel after reading every update whenever I wanted to comment..

  44. Priyanka Biswal says:

    Gosh a break ahh its hurt, bt i trust u more than any one so i knew they will be back with more stronger in their realtionship.. i actually feel sometimes u jst need some space some brake to be with u, jst u.. nd i think nandini needs that time 4 herself nd it will be good 4 both of them… as alwsys a awsm chap.. #hoping 4 manan to gettogether

  45. rashmi0103 says:

    Loving it more and more. And the more I read, it becomes more difficult to wait for another chapter. Both in love but the need if trust in the relationship is more important factor. Trust once broken, takes twice the effort to mend

  46. Chendubundu! says:

    me first!

    1. Chendubundu says:

      ok, so last couple of the chapters have been deeply emotional and draining!

      The dreaded word! The Break! 😩💔💔

      I can understand where Nandu is coming from…she has invested her everything into the marriage – her emotions, love, time, trust, faith, everything…after she has given everything she can to Manik and their marriage, and finally thinking that she was able to bring Manik out of his shell, opening up to her, trusting her whole heartedly, him saying those words weren’t expected at all!! like she said truly it was unbelievable for her. As expecte, Manik didn’t even realize what he said when he was angry and when she repeated what he said, it was like earth shattering to him…it will be a very uphill task for him to regain her trust, faith and love and her smile!

      Even after everything, she cant back out from loving him😭, help him and support him, which is hurting him more.

      I want him to try very hard and push himself to limit to make Nandu fall in Love him all over again stronger and harder.

      Looking forward to see how the family reacts to the upcoming situation and more drama ahead!

      and chapter 89 – Breaking Ties is truly breaking! don’t have much to comment on that..feel so so bad for both especially Nandini

      1. Manita V says:

        I remember how you always ask me how difficult it was for me to write the chapter. Thank you for that consideration… for feeling so deeply, not about the story but the writer too…

        Loads of love…

        PS : Difficult and draining chapters are as painful for the writer, as they are for the reader.

        1. gauti reshsha says:

          Yes i seriously admire you for that..how could you write these emotionally draining chapters..hats off to you di..love you loads…

          1. Manita V says:

            love you too… take care…
            good night 🙂

        2. Anonymous says:

          stay strong dear writer – sometimes the harders chapters to write are also the most cathartic. Sending lots of love your way so that you can heal from your pain as well

  47. singhsanskriti27 says:

    Its hurting so muchhh!!😢

  48. nice chapter di taught me a lesson for life like if i am in this situation i will also take a break and think peacefully. decision should be taken calmly like nandu did , not in rush like manik

  49. Mspagal says:

    Hmm interesting one and it’s being practical

  50. this was chapter which gave us the hope that manan will be back. i think nandu has taken wise decision. it is bettter to take a break rathe than breaking the ties forever. it is always said na when there are distances between two people there is need and sparkle to be together

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