Tangles & Ties: Chapter 63: No Bounds

Thank you for reading my story. Thank you for the comments and likes too. It means a lot to me. Love you all.

Apologies for posting late. It’s a long chapter… really long… :))) With lots of pictures…

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They followed Nandini’s itinerary and took a bus to Zaanse Schans first.

It was a village near Amsterdam famous for recreated look of the 18th and 19th century Dutch village.

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Nandini was thrilled to see the ancient windmills, wooden houses, tourists spots packed with several tourists clicking pictures, biking enthusiasts and couples roaming around hand in hand indulging in the rustic beauty and the effervescent atmosphere.

Manik was thrilled to see Nandini. Her eyes twinkled and she had a vivacious smile on her lips, making him smile too. She looked so exotic and attractive that his attention hardly deviated from her. Every few minutes, his eyes drifted back to her.

Nandini noticed him observing her this keenly and raised her brows cutely in a question, without speaking in words. He nodded to refuse. He wasn’t going to divulge anything more. Already he felt like having shared more than he had intended to. Last night, he couldn’t stop himself from telling her how much he loved her.

For which Madam had aptly thanked me!!!!

He rolled his eyes on that and then couldn’t stop a charming smile on his face –

Why do I even want to hear her say that?? I’ve always believed in gestures and feelings. Since when did I start believing in words? Nandini’s gestures speak, loud and clear, that she considers me special. Very special!! I should be satisfied with that for now. Maybe she isn’t yet in love with me… she might be… but maybe she is yet to realize it or accept it to herself! I should give her some time and not force it on her.

What if she doesn’t love you, Manik? His heart sowed seeds of doubt, which he pushed away firmly.

So, what?! If she doesn’t love me, even then I can’t stop loving her. It’s not in my hands to not love her… and I’ll wait for her to realize her feelings and share them… Till then, my love should be good enough for both of us…

She picked up several souveniers and gifts, shopped for coffee mugs and junk jewellery. When she wore a silver bracelet to show him, he shrugged and said, “You love all these trinkets, right? I’ve seen mom and Gaurvi and even my masi behaving crazy for gold and diamonds!”

“I don’t need diamonds. I’m happy with my junk!”She chirped, “Is it looking good?”

“Perfect!” He smiled and paid for it, “I remember Gaurvi throwing a tantrum and pestering Akhil to buy a solitaire ring worth 2 lacs for their engagement!”

“Uff!!! That’s sooo cute!” She animated and exaggerated her reaction and squeezed her eyes, teasing him, “Why didn’t I get this idea?”

He heaved a sigh of relief, “Thank God, I was saved!”

“Do you know why?” She asked walking along the long trail towards a coffee house.

“Why?”

“Manik… we never got engaged! We were married, directly!”

“Is that so?” He was surprised as this point had never occurred to him. “You mean, you don’t have an engagement ring?”

“Nopes!” She made a cute pout and nodded like a baby, “I don’t have an engagement ring!”

He sighed and apologized, “I’m so sorry! The first thing I’m going to buy you after reaching Bangalore will be a ring for your ring finger!”

She laughed, “No…no… I was just teasing you! I don’t need any more jewellery…”

He was not going to leave it, “No! I WILL get you a diamond ring. I’ve decided!”

“But I don’t wear diamond jewellery, Manik.”

“Gaurvi and mom have their rings. Masi, Kaki, all wear rings in their fingers. I won’t feel good if you don’t have anything in your ring finger. It didn’t strike me before! You should have told me.” He spoke blaming her, innocently.

She laughed but she was touched immensely as he had placed her with the women in his family and wanted her to be at par with them even if it was a petty issue as jewellery… he wanted her to be no less… She smiled gloriously and with a distinct pride in her eyes.

They visited the open arena museum and had their lunch before taking another tourist bus to Rotterdam.

“Why is the market so decorated?” He asked.

She giggled.“Where do you live? On planet Earth or Mars? Nothing strikes you without being told!”

“Is it something special?”

“Manik, it’s 23rd December today. It’s Christmas day after tomorrow.”

He looked around and then at her for a moment and then spoke in an excited tone, “Really?? Wowww!!! That means markets and tourist spots will be closed the day after tomorrow??? We won’t be going anywhere??”

She giggled and whacked him with her handbag, “How happy you sound!!! Jerk!! And yes, not only on 25th but markets and museums will be closed on 26th too!”

“Ahh-mazinggg!!” He rolled his eyes and yawned, “I’m soooo tired!”

“Shuttt uppp!” She frowned, unable to hide her laughter.

He checked his phone and scrolled the recent missed calls, while teasing her, “There is no point roaming around uselessly with you! I know, you will talk utter nonsense the entire day but won’t say what you should be saying!”

Sheepishly, she grinned with a prominent blush smeared on her cheeks and looked away, pressing her lips. She knew what he meant and why he was teasing her.

“What happened? Tongue-tied?? Madam talkative?” He was not going to leave her and she grinned more.

“Someone believed in gestures… why the sudden change?? Read my gestures now!!!” She teased him back and challenged him. “I won’t say anything… not a word… you read my gestures!!”

He opened his mouth, unable to believe that she knew what he was asking her and still went on to tease him. “I will answer you properly. But first I need to find a payphone. My phone has 4 missed calls by mom and it doesn’t show signals!”

“I saw a payphone there!” She pointed towards the end of the restaurant. He stood up, “I’ll be back in a moment!”

She nodded and finished her lemonade, taking out her diary from her hand-bag to scribble something while she waited for him. For next ten minutes, Manik was gone and Nandini was busy scrawling things in her diary, smiling away with a zing of exhilaration. She had been in high spirits since last night and the more he teased her, the more she was unable to voice in words what she felt for him. She was in love… and she had accepted it long back… but suddenly, it felt so difficult to tell him…

She was busy running her pen rapidly on the booklet when Manik appeared all of a sudden and snatched it away from her.

“Hey!! That’s wrong!” She immediately jumped from her chair and tried to reach for it.

He rotated the gum in his mouth and wiggled his brows, before he intimidated her like always, “Like really?? You think you can reach for it and grab it too!”

She frowned desperately and gave up the struggle, quite sure that she could never win it. His height was to his advantage and completely out of bounds for her. She was uselessly wasting energy.

“Manik, please give it back.” She requested sweetly.

“What were you writing? You promised that you will let me read it!”

She swayed her jaw in apprehension and then chewed her lower lip, “Ohkay! But it is unfinished. I will let you read it later?”

“When?”

“After we reach Rotterdam?” She asked.

He gave her the diary, “Okay! But do remember… after reaching Rotterdam, I will read it!”

“Hmm!” She nodded with a cute grin, making him smile too.

“What happened? Did you call mom?”

“No… the payphone was not working! They say that one is outside at the end of the road, in the market. I’ll try there!”

“Okay!” She collected her handbag, stuffed her pen and diary in it and walked beside him to leave the cafe.

“The decorations are gorgeous!” He turned around to click pictures in the market.

“Christmas celebrations are a big deal all over Europe. Rotterdam is famous for it’s Christmas market and festivities!”

“That is why you chose it for today??” He asked, smiling at her knack of planning things to perfection.

She grinned and nodded, while he went away to try calling his home from a payphone at the end of the road. She roamed around the market observing the roadside shops, Christmas gifts, decorations.

He returned after almost 30 minutes. She was still around the main road.

“What took you so long?” She asked with a concerned look on her face.

He shrugged, “It was a long queue! Does your phone have signals?”

“Nopes!” She nodded.

“Forget it! We’ll reach Giethoorn and call them. What did you do in this time?” He asked, removing a lock of hair falling on her face and tucking it behind her ear. His finger-tips brushed at her skin, giving her goosebumps.

She bobbed her neck, side to side and sighed, “Got a Christmas gift for you!”

He pretended to be thrilled, “For me??!! Whoaaaa!! Where is it? Give me!”

“No!!”

“Why not?”

She wiggled her brows mysteriously and whispered, “After we reach Rotterdam!”

He chuckled, “This one too!! What is Rotterdam? Heaven on earth??”

She smiled and slipped her hand around his elbow, “Every place on earth, where you are with me, is heaven on earth!”

“Sheeeeeesh!! Nandini Murthy… that was so cheesy!!”

She giggled, “That’s what I AM… Cheesy… hopeless romantic… fairytale dweller…you call me that right??”

“Ahhaa!! Now I know… you are making me pay back by letting the fire of anticipation set me ablaze?” He stepped up the first ladder of the bus with a jump and gave his hand to her to help her ride up. She warmly slipped her hand in his hand and allowed him to pull her up.

When she was pulled up on the bus, now facing him, with her hand strongly held in his hand, she placed her other palm flat on his chest and whispered, “I am seething in the same fire!”

The way she made everything exciting had a charm of it’s own. He was not someone who loved things easy. So, when she turned her confession in a thrilling adventure, he wasn’t complaining. He knew that he could wait as long as she wanted… a confession from her was going to be worth every wait!!

And he couldn’t spoil their ‘now’ for something in future. So he didn’t pester her for saying something, after that! They remained absorbed in the scenery outside the window, the extensive grassfields, the long canals dividing the villages, the sun about to set any moment and the raw beauty of nature. They talked about their childhood, schools, memories of holiday, friends… After some time, she rested her head on his shoulder and was quiet for a long time. The bliss of togetherness and her head over his shoulder kept him immersed in the bliss of love he had recently declared. He was glad that he did that. She knew about his feelings and it assured her. She was evidently happy!

“What are you thinking, Nandu?” He asked her after a long time.

“Something deep!” She sighed.

“And… you won’t care to share it with me!! Right?”

“I will share it…”

“But in Rotterdam??” He asked suggesting the possible reply,

She laughed uncontrollably, so much that she had a tear in her eye, “You are hopeless, you know?”

“I know, you were going to say that!”

“You are so right, Manik Malhotra! Good one!” She went back to lying on his shoulder and took a deep breath of ecstasy, making him grin too.

“I will miss you when you will go to Chennai! God!! It’s going to be so difficult!” He sighed.

She raised her head again and looked at him without another word. He shrugged, “What?”

Seriously and firmly, she declared, “I’ve been thinking about it since few days.”

“What about that?”

“There are hundreds of speciality hospitals in Bangalore. Thousands of doctors work in those hospitals and for their private practice. It’s a big city. I’m sure everyone doesn’t go to Chennai to find a career. There must a lot of scope in Bangalore… I just need to work hard for a bit more…”

“But, Nandu…”

“Nothing doing!” She was determined. “I’m not going. Even if I have to learn a new language!”

“But…”

She placed her hand on his lips, “I’m not leaving you!”

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Rotterdam was beautifully decorated, just like she had told him. The sun had already set by now and the lights were up.

The entire city was bathed in thousands of neon lamps, various coloured lights and Christmas trees at the Coolsingel, City hall and the Church.

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“Gorgeous!” He sighed.

“Didn’t I tell you?” She was visibly excited, with a bright sparkle in her eyes and a bliss of satisfaction on her lips. “It’s like millions of stars have descended on Earth to celebrate with us.”

He looked at her and nodded, “You are a serious romantic, you know!?!”

“I know!! And that is why I wanted to bring you here!” She pressed her lips. “Come, we’ll go to the Church over there.”

They entered the Church, decorated in its full glory by lights, flowers, ribbons, balloons etc. There was a big Christmas tree at the entrance. They followed the tourists who entered the Church and went around to observe the statues of the kings who constructed and maintained it, paintings of different verses from Bible and knelt at the kneelers to pray.

She took him to the far end of the Church where they could see hundreds of lighted candles on several racks and unlit ones at the bottom racks. She searched for coins in her bag, “Oops! I don’t have change. Manik, give me 2 Euros!”

“2 Euros for one candle??!!!” He whispered, behind her, raising his brows.

“Shut up!” She giggled, “Give me a coin!”

He gave her a coin. She put the coin in a box meant for the same and picked up a candle to light. She moved away towards the racks. He kept standing there, when a Dutch woman of around fifty years, spoke to him thinking he didn’t know what to do. “Son! You need to put the coins there for the Church, think of someone you love and pray in the honour of God. Pray to show your faith in God and to wish for good health and lifelong happiness for the one you love!”

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He smiled and move aside, but without removing her eyes from Nandini who was lighting the candle with the purest expression on her face. He took out another coin to put it in the box and picked up a candle before he went near her.

Nandini had her eyes lowered on the long racks containing rows of candles. When she lit her candle, she raised her eyes towards him and smiled. Her face reflected the glow from the candles. Never had he ever seen such a pristine, divine view in his life. He could fall in love with her, every day, every moment and still feel that he wasn’t doing enough.

He had never done anything like this in his life, before. So he observed others and Nandini and then he lit his candle before placing it at an empty space next to Nandini’s. After a brief prayer, they walked out of the Church and into the market decorated by lights all around them.

She held his hand, looking up in the sky with a child’s excitement. “Manik, Isn’t it beautiful?”

“Yes!” He curled his hand around her palm, “I can feel a strange tranquility here!”

“I know right?!?!” She chirped and started walking when he didn’t leave her hand and she was pulled back to him.

“What?” She asked, searching his face.

All his discussions with himself, consolations of hope, justifications, denials, giving her time, all evaporated before his impatience. He couldn’t wait anymore.

“Do you love me?” He asked straight away.

She blushed and lowered her eyelids, before raising them again with a dazzling smile, making his heart beat. She sighed deeply and then whispered, “Who do you think, I wished for when I prayed in the Church?”

Whoaaa!! If he was a king of indirect compliments, she had learnt a lot from him. He was thrilled to hear that but wanted to know more… He didn’t want to interrupt when she had finally decided to open up, even for a bit. He was happy with these small bits of glee.

She took a deep breath and said, “Love is – eating healthy while craving for junk, because you want to eat healthy food… feeling content with you and not needing anyone else to make me feel complete…  feeling beautiful when you look at me… feeling safe when I’m with you… willingly staying at the couch watching sports and stupid news, just to sit close to you… thinking in the bus journey how thrilling it would feel to add to my name – words I never knew before…  words like ‘Manik’ and ‘Malhotra’… thinking about you whenever someone says words like ‘prayer’ and ‘wishes’…feeling suffocated and out of breath whenever I think about Chennai…”

He was tongue-tied. Speechless. Now he knew what she must have felt when he declared his love for her. His heart had turned into a mushy puddle which he hated to accept. He could feel a heavy load on his throat, as he could speak nothing.

There had been nothing, even remotely close to this, anyone had ever said or done for him. Not a single person had ever made him feel so special. She had been waiting to say it all in a special way… just as she was … hopeless romantic and mushy… she had spoken of her love in a divine setting, amidst stars and lights… Like her fairytales…

Nothing could be as perfect as this!!!

He walked closer to her, without removing eyes from her even for a moment and pulled her in his arms. Before he could say anything, she placed her soft fingertips on his lips.

“I have more…”

“No!” His throat was nearly choked, “You don’t need to do anything else! I’m already overwhelmed!”

She blushed and softly whispered, “Manik, you wanted to read my diary? I was writing something for you, today!”

“For me?” He was floored.

She took out her diary and gave it to him. He nodded, refusing to take it and requested, “You read it for me!”

She blushed more and opened the last page. He held her hand and made her sit on a bench under a tree, decorated with balls of yellow lights and over which a plant of mistletoe with red berries was wrapped.

 

She opened the page and started reading – In a beautiful, soft voice, giving proper pauses for effect and looking at him in between to see his expressions –

( I wrote this from Nandini’s side )

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He held her hand and interlaced their fingers into each other while she recited her little poetry… and when she finished it, he exerted a subtle pressure on their hands, warmly enclosing it in his grasp.

She was nervous, “It’s just juvenile… but it reflects what I feel…”

He threw a heavy breath of air out, with great effort, making a pout of his lips, “Phewww!! Stop it… I can’t handle more…”

“Manik… I …” She started speaking more.

He slipped his hand around her neck, softly caressing it and lowered his forehead over hers, with a deep sigh, “Ssshhh!!! Shutttt Uppppp!!! Let me gain some senses back! I’m totally lost here! You bowled me over and knocked me out!”

She blushed and smiled softly, “One last thing… then you can react together for everything…”

“No Nandu… please!! My poor heart can’t hold more than this. No one has ever loved me so much!!”

“Just one more thing??” She asked sweetly, innocently and with a subtle coy smile on her lips. He couldn’t refuse.

“What is it?”

“Your gift!”

“I don’t want any gift!” He moved his face away and nodded awkwardly. “I don’t even believe in gifts!”

“I know that. So, I kept it for myself!”

“Whattttt??” He laughed at that, “That’s new!!”

“Won’t you guess, what it could be that I got as a gift for you but had it myself??!!!” She shrugged, creating an air of mystery!

He observed her keenly and thought about it. Here was a catch!! But what? He frowned and noticed her glee by her pressed lips and glorious proud smile. Immediately, he nodded, “Nooooo!!!! No…no…no…. no way!!! Please don’t tell me you did that stupid thing which I hate about couples… it’s so so so silly…I know what it is…”

Offended, she frowned. “It’s NOT silly!!! I love them…you know…” And then she giggled softly like a baby, making him grin at her hopelessness too.

“Manik, every important event of my life, I’ve had it inked on me… You are above all… How can I not have you on me…??!!!”

His breath was caught in his chest and he didn’t know how to react to this silly girl’s crazy love for him. She knew no limits, no filters, no speed breakers… and he had known that about her, from day one, since he had met her first.

Today, she proved it yet again that she knew no bounds when it came to her love for him! She was that adorable!!

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Thanks for reading!

Tangles & Ties: Chapter 64: Made For Each Other

 

 

161 Comments Add yours

  1. Anamika Roy says:

    I joined here after a long gap…..I re-read the entire thing….I was aware of your shifting to other platform but i got late to actually locate you…..well the magic of your stories had that impact on me to find you somehow…so here I am reading again and not to forget to mention that I am clean bowled with your flawless writing….Too good….

    1. manitavb says:

      Thank you!

  2. Priya says:

    I have read this chapter almost countless times…Wow..Just wow….I am in loss 9f words like manik

  3. Anonymous says:

    I still feel the effect of this …..feel so amazing to see this type of love ….do they really exist?
    Love the way both understand each other care for each other..the feeling is so different ..love is this the way both tease each other and stand for each other …thi is the power or truelove…its hard to believebt i really want to believe it that true love exsist …love the update soo muchhhh

  4. supriya5997 says:

    This one just made my heart smile

  5. khurshidashaikh says:

    💋💋💋💋💋💋👏👏👏

  6. Anonymous says:

    Isn’t that tattoo beautiful?!! If only all married women get their husbands names tattooed on ring finger 😂😂

  7. Madhavi says:

    You bowled me, darl. What a wonderful confession. No words to praise your writing skills..

  8. Banshri Rana says:

    I’m totally speechless, tougtied😷😨 beautiful & best confession I have ever read😍😍…. superb update❤

  9. Deepa says:

    So so beautiful and adorable confession I have a read I love poem u wrote behalf of Nandini so precious and marvelous moments of manan I damn love this story

  10. Anonymous says:

    Di are we getting the update today ? 🙂

  11. Anonymous says:

    Di are we getting the update today ☺️

  12. Devi bhupati says:

    This is sooo intense….the last three chapters , their confessions, their feelings every thing is so divine and beautiful….their confessions are simple, straight forward but very very deep and touching..they didn’t use any cheesy …their confessions are unique just like them…❤❤❤…i’m hopelessly in love with themmm😍😍😘😘😘

  13. Kaushiki says:

    Manita dii last two chapters were the cutest.. nd their love confessions that were really unexpected.. nd were out of the world.. u wrote it so beautifully.. im in love.. their confession is just like them.. out of the world, pure nd unique.. 💕😍😍

  14. Gursheen says:

    Di, are we getting the update on Thursday or before that?

    1. manitavb says:

      You may get it before too 😀 Possibly tomorrow

      1. Gursheen says:

        Thank you ♥️

  15. Angeleverr says:

    When are you posting next chapter di??

    1. manitavb says:

      Soon 🙂

      1. Anonymous says:

        😍

      2. Angeleverr says:

        Thnks..

  16. Lavina says:

    Oh my God…. This was the most beautiful chapter. She inked his name on her finger ring…awww! Doc, that’s a beautiful poetry you have written, I loved to see your handwriting 🙂

  17. AnanyaDas23 says:

    All sorts of emotions are erupting on reading this chapter! It’s so beautiful yet simple charming in its own way. I so wish to have a true love like them!! I’m just tongue tied, ecstatic and what not. You’re so talented Di!!
    My true inspiration ❤️
    So much love to you❤️❤️
    Keep writing ❤️
    With Loads of love,
    Ananya☺️
    Wattpad id-AnanyaDas23

  18. Ananya Das says:

    I second you!! I Really have no words to say… Speechless, Tongue tied, overwhelmed and all sorts of emotions are erupting from within. All i can say is..
    You’re the best, Manita di ❤️
    Lots of love to you di❤️
    Ananya.

  19. someone16sh says:

    Eagerly Waiting for next update ? Are we getting it ?
    If not today , Then it’s Okay :))

  20. Anonymous says:

    No words yaar…. I am speechless… your poetry 👌

  21. Anonymous says:

    Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!❤

  22. mayishafairuz says:

    I’m speechless 🙈🙊

  23. Anjana says:

    What do I say, like what do I just say! After every chapter of this story I have never ending words of praise, but today, like Manik even I’m tongue tied and speechless! I can’t say any particular part was really good, cause that would so much Injustice to every other word you’ve penned down! When I read Manik’s confession, I was pretty sure Nandu’s would be super beautiful, but this one just knocked me off! And yaaaay she’s not going to Chennai, though it’s my hometown, I’ve never been so happy thinking that someone doesn’t want to and isn’t going to Chennai!!

    1. Ananya Das says:

      I second you!! I Really have no words to say… Speechless, Tongue tied, overwhelmed and all sorts of emotions are erupting from within. All i can say is..
      You’re the best, Manita di ❤️
      Lots of love to you di❤️
      Ananya.

  24. Anonymous says:

    Amazing is the word and that says it all

  25. maniknandini1 says:

    I am soo sorry Di for commenting late.. Was soo busy and I wanted to read this chapter again aaramse and then comment..
    Do you know Di… How much it is difficult to read the update while seating with approx 30 people and from them 10 are the evil friends of yours who are ready to do postmortem about the reason of every action of yours.. That shy smile was their on my face when I was reading the update.. And after that become the bakra for everyone’s tease..
    When I saw the notification about the update I was like fatafat se sare office Kam Kam khatam karu aur mobile leke baithu..
    It was again an amazing update Di.. From start to end I loved every line every word of it.. How beautifully she confessed to him.. And I loved Nandini’s way to fulfill her wish with confession. She confessed him in fairy tail style only with the glowing lighter and the most beautiful gift.. And then her that letter… It is soo fascinating..
    The letter is soo awesome Di.. Every word spoke thousands of emotions all together.. Now I can say that Jiju is soo lucky after all he got the most romantic life partner for him..
    And in the end Nandini’s gift it was superb I have been thinking like this things are soo cheesy but now I am loving this soo much..
    You are the best writer I have ever known Di.. Really.. You just got me gitters everytime I read the update.. Your words have some unique power.. It automatically make us fall for them..
    I think you should try to write scripts movies Di you know like side business I am damn sure your stories will make people crazy just like we are..
    Love love and love.. Keep writing keep smiling
    Stay blessed 💫

  26. Avni says:

    Amazing eagerly waiting for the next part 😍😍😍😍😍😍💕

  27. Anonymous says:

    Amazing story….. really appreciate it writing style and I love this Manik

  28. AanyaSharma says:

    I read every chapter and think that this is the best chapter but u prove me wrong everytime!!! Every chapter is more amazing and wonderful than the previous one!!! Every chapter is beautiful just like our manan !!! This chapter is seriously breathtaking beautiful!!! Her confession was seriously a fairytale one!!!

  29. Ashy baiju says:

    Every single time I read ur chapter, I fall in love with ur writing as well as the concept of love. I wish I had someone like manik in my life. I have always loved the characters manik and nandini. Thanks for keeping it alive. Means a lot… 💗💗

  30. Vishakha says:

    Incredibly awesomeness

  31. Kalpana says:

    I loved this total update. I have no words to say.

  32. taurean82 says:

    Beautifully penned…. when you took us through the tour.. I felt i am on the tour seeing exotic places……you have a gift to take your audience into the fantasy world of whatever you write….and make them live through it… thank you and love you for all the efforts you put so we can experience this.😍

  33. Ann Aysh says:

    Awww.. My heart cant hold more.. Its too much love everywhere.. Did u take phd in romance… Oh god i cant handle sweetness of this chapter.. I was very sad today.. I forgot my sadness for sometime while reading this…

  34. Juii says:

    Wow such a beautiful update……😍😍
    Loved loved loved it tooooooo muchhhhhh!!!!!!
    MaNan adorable as always😍
    The way you have written this is superb…. 👌👌
    I’m seriously in love with the way of your writing… You have some really amazing skills… The way you write each n every details is awesome😍… The wait for each update is worth it…. Keep up with the good work… 👍

  35. Malvika Mahajan says:

    Beautiful… the more i read ur stories the more i love ur writings… now eagerly waiting for the next chapter…

  36. Anonymous says:

    Awesome

  37. Priyauday says:

    OMG This part is MAGNIFICENT❤😭.. the way you have penned both Manan’s confessions and reactions made my day❣..

  38. Unnati limbachiya says:

    How can I explain I m speechless fabulous mind-blowing I can’t describe so beautiful pure ❤️❤️❤️

  39. chendubundu says:

    WoW! Just WoW! Yes Nandini dont say anymore, as with Manik, even we cant take it anymore! Such a pure and heartfelt confession….you are sooooo good with expressing both of their feelings. Damn I am falling short of words to say how I felt after reading this update.
    Just let me melt in that! I already read it twice in the past 1 hr. hayeeeeee

  40. anjana says:

    omg so so superb ….i am in love with this story😍😍😍😍

  41. Anonymous says:

    It’s really very amazing… Totally left speechless..

  42. lovepeehu says:

    And and special mention to your written poem in behalf of Nandini 👏👏❤️
    You are truly Most romantic person here Diiii 🙈😆😍😍😍😍😍

  43. Arpita Goel says:

    Beautiful update loved how she expressed her love.

  44. Anonymous says:

    Wow ….breathtaking

  45. nakshi1990 says:

    This was most lovable one..will always remain my fav update… Like seriously tattoo…

  46. chandrasan says:

    3) She got inked his name ❤❤ this girl is hell crazyyyy in good way😍😍😍 her explanation ” I have got everything inked which are important u are way more spl than those ” 😍😍😭😭😭😭😭❤❤💓💓 she failed to add one more thing those tattoos are hidden in secret places coz they are directly or indirectly shows her vulnerability but his name is so openly displayed which means that he is her strength and only hers❤😍😍 I can’t wait for his response now 😭😭😭

    1. nakshi1990 says:

      Well said

      1. Anonymous says:

        It’s really very amazing… Totally left speechless..

    2. manitavb says:

      Yeahh… that’s the major difference in her other tattoos and this one… She flaunts Manik’s name on her ring finger. Who wants diamonds now 🙂

      1. chandrasan says:

        No need for ring now, this is more precious 😍❤

  47. Gursheen says:

    Dumbstruck, speechless… I don’t know I will be writing now coz I’m still in a trabce. So, don’t mind of I’m not in sync today.
    MAGICAL, yes that would be the word. you have left no Stone inturned to create the magic. I was smiling like an idiot throughout the update, everything was so well fabricated.
    Manik was so so insecure about the fact what if Nandini doesn’t feel the same way. But the way his love for her over comes his insecurities is so so blissful. “Till then my love should be good enough for both of us.” This line gavee goosebumps literally. Later, at the church, when she asks Manik for the change shows so much the growth. From hesitating to use his money to rightfully asking him for it.
    “Do you love me”? Hayeeee!!!! too direct, this gave me chills. He just couldn’t wait. I’m still drooling over this scene.
    In short of adjectives for Nandu’s confession. Never seen so honest and authentic person like her, her character is like a role model. Girls, who wants Manik for themselves should also be his Nandini first. She has his right on him, on his things. My most favorite part, when she says she wants to add his name to her name whereas earlier she clearly mentioned that she wouldn’t change her surname. But now she wants the world to call her ‘Nandini Manik Malhotra’ love does that I think.
    Last but definitely not the least. The diary, your poetry di, it was so passionate, so light yet has all the meaning. No wonder you must be very romantic 😉 The description is one of its kind, no wonder he was amazed and taken away with delight. What a unique way to say the 3 magical words, to tell him, he is her soul, her mind and her heart.
    She literally doesn’t need any diamonds or jewels coz she already has the purest gem with her for a lifetime.
    Di, I have no words to praise your excellence. Prayers are the purest kind of love I can give.
    May God bless you, Hamesha.
    P.S- I should not be saying this but please update the next part already.😭

  48. Sireesha Pasumarthy says:

    How will i comment when you left me speechless?🤷‍♀️

  49. Chandrasan says:

    2) Her POEM, it has my heart. Actually everything about this chapter and story has my heart!!!!! He collected her broken pieces and she was glad to be HERSELF around him, he is her sunshine in cloudy day and her star. She declared that their love is forever howww cuteeee.. he clearly was bowled and knocked out by the sweet and spl confession. She made sure she made him feel spl in every sense.. He was taken back, want to gain his sense and cannot handle her confession. He was overwhelmed and his reaction until now is altogether different feeling for him and us tooo. No one ever done this to him coz they aint ” His Nandu ” who is crazily in love with U manik..

  50. Madhuri Wadhwani says:

    Why does it seems like Nandini of Tangles and Ties resembles Manita.
    And why do I feel like your honeymoon destination was also Amsterdam😜

    1. manitavb says:

      No one can be as sweet and understanding as Nandini . So no, Nandini is faaaar more patient than me. I do lose my cool now and then.
      As per my honeymoon, again a big NO!!
      My honeymoon destination was not Amsterdam… In fact, I didn’t get to have a ‘honeymoon’ per se… My hubby is an Engineer and Govt. Officer and he had just joined training. He didn’t have leaves. I was studying for PG entrances and had exams starting 2 weeks after the marriage.
      So!!
      That’s what happens in real life 🙂

  51. Dolly says:

    Amazing!!!

  52. Anjali says:

    I m blown away😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍Can some 1 plzzzz help me 😚😚What was it , update or a cmplt story in itself . Manik !!!!!Manik !!!Manik!!!! U r gone 4 good ..the tattoo was ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤The set up , efforts , words, moments so so soooooooooo beautiful. She is not leaving him ☺😋Holiday is the only think he thought about Christmas 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣or may b 4 Nandini . 4 sure , it’s your day Manik specially bt it’s Completely Manan day .

  53. Chandrasan says:

    Confession, where should I start ?? Confession is divided into 3 parts. 1) Her vocal confession not only left manik tongue tied, it had left me tongue tied as well!! Two different personalities who are poles apart but their IDEA of LOVE is same. This quality have my heart. The way she said ” I feel beautiful when u look at me, i fell safe around you ( his caring nature) , I “” willingly “” watch stupid news just to sit close to you. When a girl confess that she feel content and he complete her is something veryyy spl.. OH man!!! whataaa confession

  54. Shehwar says:

    This chapter is so beautiful.. Really your versatility amazes me every time. Previously I read your story Sparks and Spice and it was awesome.. I loved that story alot and now I reading your other stories.. Seriously I am unable to decide which story I love more..

  55. Tanvi says:

    Oh my god they have my heart… Like seriously..
    How adorable can they be now…
    Cutiess❤❤❤
    I m always eagerly waiting for ur updates💕

  56. Madhuri Wadhwani says:

    Speechless🤭

  57. hinuthakkar11 says:

    I don’t know what to say about this update🙈🙈🙈i m so speechless today by reading this🤧🤧🤧
    Firstly i so knew she isn’t gonna go to Chennai when he has confessed his feelings nd she has already realised nd wanted to tell him about hers so it wasn’t possible for her to left him for sometime nd go there😄nd manik is a total kiddo like one side he wants her to confess other side he wants to give her sometime but at last he couldn’t stop himself nd asked her directly😂cutiee❤️ nd u know dii in morning i read this confession on insta nd i knew u were gonna update about nandu’s confession😍for a fact they both have confessed their feelings so simply like no arrangements nothing nd i loved it the most it was like the most purest confession i have ever seen🤧❤️nd that poetry has my stole my heart literally🤧🤧❤️❤️so pure nd beautiful it was😭❤️under the fairytale lights nd decorations she has confessed him though she wanted to do a proper one but it couldn’t get more perfect😍😍😍😍nd that tattoo😍😍😭😭how much she loves him that proved here😭😭😭😭jese Manik was speechless after her confession nd tattoo thing we also left speechless today🙈🙈nd both the confessions are my favourite i seriously can’t chose anyone as both were so pure nd just beautiful😭😭❤️❤️

  58. Chandrasan says:

    Did not so expressive manik said that he will miss nandini and its going to be tough for him once she leave to chennai ? Manik malhotra please dont give such heart attacks to us hahahahah. She is not going to leave him means she is not taking the Chennai offer yayieeeee. Happieee wala dance.

  59. Yogita says:

    Beautiful 💜

  60. Poornima says:

    Wow no words…. Beautiful confession I have ever seen or read……

  61. Chandrasan says:

    Before talking about confession, I want to confess something to you DI.. U are a bundle of talent and the way you penned the entire chapter is mind blowing !!! ” I am seething in the same fire ” wowww like woww I wonder how could you write like this. “Never had he ever seen such a pristine and serine view in his life ” he could love her every day ” I am dead and bowled out totally by your writing. Word fells short to appreciate you di!!!!!!!!

  62. Mahak Yadav says:

    I have read this thrice back to back! Just so beautiful! More than that!!♥️♥️♥️♥️✨✨🤩🤩

  63. Mahak Yadav says:

    I have read this thrice back to back! Just so beautiful! More than that!!♥️♥️♥️♥️✨✨🤩🤩

  64. anmolawasthi767 says:

    Beautiful😍😍😍The last lines 😘❤

  65. Aditi says:

    Oh my my 😍😍😍this was just simply amazing fantastic n what know… there we were expecting something extra ordinary & u gave us something simple which was beyond extra ordinary n which could give me goosebumps ❤❤❤❤I wish to fall in love the way u make Mann fall for each other 😍😍😍it just makes me feel how it would feel to be in such love.. Evn this thought is sooo overwhelming ❤❤❤gosh I just wish to hv my manik who would love like this r maybe evn beyond this😍❤❤😍 thank u for making me want to be in love n already giving me the goosebumps I would get being in love with my partner in such a moment 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  66. Anusha says:

    Oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.. A brilliantly penned chapter. It started with manik thinking that nandinis gestures are important , she considers him special and even if she is not in love now, his love is enough for both of them. That cute talking in his mind is noteworthy. Their conversation in this chapter is the best they had (specially ” Letting the fire of anticipation set me ablaze “and her dialogue” i am seething in the same fire” This one actually set me ablaze in their love). The church scene, lighting the lamp and praying for each other created a divine atmosphere. Then her confession. I loved it is in the same as of his. He started with love and she too started with love… “Love is eating healthy and leaving the loved junk food because he loves healthy food”… Then her poem. The poem has a deep touch and simple words created sparks. Your poem too have it’s own essence especially “you found my broken pieces of heart that I once threw”.. It connected very well with her bcz she believed in love but heart was broken before and he found that broken heart. Then at last the gift… When I first saw that image while scrolling to read next, I didn’t concentrate on manik written there. I thought it is the ring in the image…. But as I read it and got to know his name inked in her finger and her explanation of that was cute.. ” I inked all the important things in my life and you are above all”.. I was having goosebumps while reading this inked part. This chapter is now by heart for me as I have read it many times especially the dialogue part where they talked of Chennai and she told she is not going… Waiting eagerly for his reaction…

  67. Sakshi Mehra says:

    This is my favourite chapter by far the display of emotions is spectacular amazing I have no words fab I cannot wait for the next one

  68. mspagal says:

    This is crazy and beautiful proposal and it’s awesome

  69. Anonymous says:

    Gosh ! Manik has officially bold me over . The thing that for Manik said only his love was enough for both of. And our hopelessly romantic Nandu. Seriously she has got all the guts in the world!

  70. chandrasan says:

    Them holding holds, teasing each other, nandu sharing his shoulder, soaking in love, shopping together, praying for each other, traveling together❤❤ they are giving major couple goals ❤😍😍❤❤ putting kala teeka to my MANAN 💓 evil eyes shooo awayyyyu

  71. chandrasan says:

    His question abt decorations 😂😂 all he could think abt Christmas is that the shops gonna be shut 🤣🤣 so that he can relax his lazy ass staying in cottage all day lol 😝😝😝 that’s our super lazy manik 😐😑

  72. Bidisha Mohanty says:

    No no no no no you just can’t end it here.Please no 😭…Gosh I was in a different land altogether and now I see “Thanks for reading .” 😭😭😭…Manik how are you even breathing ? Because if I were you , I must have had a nervous breakdown by now.Why the hell are they so cute,romantic? Manita Di am telling you , you are responsible for hiking our expectations several notches up when it comes to love and romance.My heart is all gooey puddle of feelings after reading this update.Can Thursday come already? 😖

  73. Anonymous says:

    ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  74. Anonymous says:

    Amazing in love with your work

  75. piya66 says:

    It’s so so beautiful chapter……. I m in love with them and di you write so beautifully 😍 you are awesome ♥️

  76. Manvi says:

    O god, my heart. Just like manik my heart is a mush now. It was soo beautiful, yet so simple.. ❤

    PS. Plzz tell manik to kiss her under Mistletoe 💛
    (I am hopeless romantic, I know 😅)

    1. manitavb says:

      He will 🙈🥰
      That is exactly why the Mistletoe is here 🤩🤩

  77. Amela Khan says:

    Awesome, amazing, beautifull, nandini’s confession is so pure so lovely. Love the idea of gift ofcourse when she is with manik she doesn’t need any diamond, the poetry was ❤❤❤
    Love todays update

    1. manitavb says:

      💖💖

  78. pixiepari says:

    you said it’s a longgg one…but that was so smalll…did you write that poetry for ur hubby ??? that was soo cute…your everyu character mazes me in som e way or other…how do you manage to do so

    1. manitavb says:

      So cute of you!!
      No, I didn’t write that poetry for my hubby… that poetry was exclusively for Manik… from Nandini…
      ( my hubby believes in gestures, so he gets gestures only 😋😂😂)

  79. Krutika says:

    Mesmerized by this chapter 😍
    Sooo beautiful ❤️

    1. manitavb says:

      💖🤗

    2. Anonymous says:

      Don’t know about manik and nandini but i think you are one heck of romantic person . I liked nandini’s confession and manik’s dialogues in between her confession was funny , like who says shut upp or stop it when a person get overwhelmed but he is manik malhotra, he can do anything .
      I loved nandini’s confession with extra cheese and yout poetry too , have you wrote it for your hubby or it was really for manik from nandini
      Please post soon

      1. manitavb says:

        Omggg… Why is everyone asking the same question??? Hahaha!!!
        No, the poetry was written last night, exclusively for Manik! From Nandini.

        It was not written for my hubby as I have made it very clear to him that he will never get a piece of poetry from me, for he believes that words are not necessary 😀 😀

  80. Ray_Sam(Kiran) says:

    Hey
    Your story is so beautiful. You know why? Because, according to me you penned it so honestly. That it only shows positive side of a relationship. That everyone starts believing in it. That who read your stories want to be tangled and tied. To experience the spark and spice of relationship. So, keep writing such beautiful things and spread only positivity.

    1. manitavb says:

      That’s so sweet of you! Lots of love 🤗🤗🤗

  81. N says:

    I have no words to describe my feelings rn😭❤️ this is love!

  82. Drishti says:

    This was really amazing….. The confession that both of them made is exactly like how their characters are, I mean totally spellbound and speechless… I am so much in love with their characters and the story.

  83. Anonymous says:

    Generally I don’t comment on any stories but your stories made n do that , they are so beautifully written that you fall in love with them.

  84. Madhuri53 / Madhuri Kulkarni says:

    Part 63 –  Such beautiful update. Your titles were always apt for the update. I just liked her confession and very much glad that she dint do any fancy, flower & roses types confession. She used the very beautiful place for her confession which made him go stun. Her every move, every tease made him happy and hopeful and expect more from her which she was successful in it. She did confess like him in indirect words. Her every word was full of love for him. He was so much overwhelmed that he couldn’t take more.
     
    Her poem was simple but touched to his heart with her simple words. Uffff…..her tattoo was bang on over all these. Her line about inking his name on her body to show how much crazy she was for him, was just like her, adorable. How manik will handle this. She gave him much much more what he expected in confession from her.
     
    You wrote lovely poem. Really you are blessed with writing skill. I loved this part very much. ♥️♥️♥️
     
    Madhuri53

     

  85. Apurva says:

    OMG!!! I’m flat….what an update…
    Utterly romantic, expressing the bond between MaNan…..

  86. Rashmi says:

    Awesome did😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

  87. Anonymous says:

    OMG wat an update. I loved itttt. U r amazing ❤️❤️❤️

  88. Heaven to hell says:

    I thought it was ring .. but woa.. it’s his name on her finger… That’s unique and cute… Just like her .. me too feeling overwhelmed and speechless after reading this … Pure love😍😘

  89. chandrasan says:

    Manik’s pov for waiting for her confession is so beautiful and it shows his Unconditional and pure love❤ what could a girl ask more than this!!! Partner who loves u without expecting anything in return and waiting for his love to love back ❤❤ what if she didn’t love me, my love is enough for both of us 💓😍😭I want manik 😍😍❤❤ am sorry nandu but I want him 😭😭 but all this went in bin the very next sec when he asked “do u love me” That shows how desperately he craved for her confession, am loving this too ❤😂😂🤣

  90. ~Shiv~ says:

    Nandini doesn’t need any diamonds.. Manik is her jewel and she wears him proudly on her ring finger now.. Both the confessions were one of their kind, true to the characters and how they’d have said whatever they did.

    I’m very addicted to this story, so much that the more I read, the more I want to read ❤️

    P.S. – They are still sitting under the mistletoe, right? 😍

    1. manitavb says:

      Right 😊😊

  91. chandrasan says:

    Nandini was thrilled to see ancient mills while our hero was thrilled to see his girl 😍😍😍 her smile made him smile ❤❤ everytime his eyes landed on her gorgeous and happy face ❤ how can u write all beautiful little moments with utmost perfection😍😍😍😍😭😭😭❤❤❤❤

  92. Sonal says:

    This was so beautiful…
    I am speechless!!!

  93. chandrasan says:

    First images, beautiful beautiful images with breathtaking view 😍😍 it was so perfect for their spl moments ❤ felt like I was living there 😍😍

  94. chandrasan says:

    Speechless and am short of words to describe this chapter 😭😭 where to start, I wanted to start from end but I want to talk abt the start as well!! Am confused, only u can make me confuse!!!!

  95. Anonymous says:

    Wohh you bowled me over Manita with this update. That poetry and the tattoo is so beautiful and precious and I can’t even imagine how love can be this beautiful 👏👏👏👐👐

  96. Gursheen says:

    She got his name inked on her ring finger. Who needs a ring now
    She is so so adorable. My heart ♥️😭

  97. DBRSR1822 says:

    Manita dear..you have made me speechless….each word you have penned down was soul touching..You have clearly portrayed the feeling of true and pure love..
    and the poem written by Nandini was BEAUTIFUL…it fascinated me soo much that I ended up admiring it for atleast 10 to 15 mins.
    Keep up the amazing work dear..Love you loads..!!!

  98. shininstar37 says:

    Damn beautiful…. bowled over by the lovely update🤩😍🤩😍😘😘 d poetry d pics each n everything is just overwhelming…. couldn’t control my happy tears😘😍

  99. Anonymous says:

    A love like this……….i actually am at a loss of words. I just wish characters that you sketch come alive some day, then the world will be close to perfect

  100. Bhavika says:

    Sorru but couldn’t see wat nadu wrote for Manik… Didi i missed smthn?

  101. Kavita menon says:

    This was crazy manita..loved every bit of it.. can love be so beautiful..u made me cry feeling every word..how beautifully expressed..no words to say. Your a blessed person who can pen down feelings so nicely.. love u girl..and Ur story gives me immense pleasure.god bless.

  102. Anonymous says:

    Awwww I have no words I am literally speechless ❤😭

  103. Amit Jain says:

    I want the password to read chapter no. 54

  104. Anonymous says:

    I want the password to read chapter no. 54

  105. Rajyalakshmi says:

    I am speechless……love u dear ……thanks for such an amazing update…..god bless you ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

  106. krinal310 says:

    I don’t have words for this chappy….it was out of this world….yeyyyy she will live in Bangalore with him and she confessed too

  107. Anonymous says:

    Di , simply you made me cry.

  108. Priya says:

    The wait was worth…Thku di for soaking us in tt la la land…It was like i literally lived those places along with manan…Coming to the episode it was spell bound awesome astounding Nd fantabolous..I think if romance had a face i would show you…That poem was love…Really it would be every girl n guyd dream to experience what manan went through in the last two chapters..It was like i was walking along with them blushing at their cute antics…This story is turning to be so realistic adorable and fantabolous…Just can’t get enough of it di…As i told you before I never want their honeymoon to end…The nandinis confession and the pictures in the update was dreamy…I love you loads di…This book should be published and also be adapted to a movie or series…I really want it to go places n rock…Love you loads di…thku for the updates …It really means so much to ua…Which we can never express…

  109. Suchii.. 💖 says:

    Ahhh.. Diii you are just out of world and you know that right 😭😭😭😭💖😍😍. I’m just uff.. I’m speechless after readimg that poem you know 😭😍 it was so beautiful. You just made their proposal so unique. And the tattoo you know on the other day I Was just thinking about this thing ki why don’t she have a tattoo. But you just fulfilled that wish for me 💖💖😍😍. Love you Di.. It was amazing and I loved it 💖😘

    1. Shrunali says:

      U r an amazing writer.. why don’t u publish ot as book.. god i have no words for this chapter❤❤❤ God bless u girl 😘

  110. Sangeeta says:

    Wow it’s so beautiful😍😍😍😍😍😍
    Surely they r couple goals
    😚😙😗
    Loved it d day by day story is setting it’s standard so high dat no one can reach there easy

  111. Mansi says:

    Amazing 😍

  112. Anonymous says:

    Aww Wat a gesture to show her love to him typical nandu, awsomeeee, amazinggggg,,, tx for the update.

  113. Anonymous says:

    Wow! Just wow! Smile didn’t leave while I was reading this chapter and even after finishing it.
    Mercy

  114. Komal says:

    Out if words after reading the update…
    It’s so beautiful ❤❤

  115. Anonymous says:

    What a heartwarming chapter…..totally in love with itt

  116. Salriz says:

    Wow wat an update how beautifully you describe each n every thing loved it no words trust me it’s beyond beautiful ❤️

  117. MaryaanQ says:

    Why is there no LOVE Button!!! This is hopeless but this update is ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  118. Anonymous says:

    Why is there no LOVE Button!!! This is hopeless but this update is ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  119. Azania25 says:

    Speechless………. all I can say after reading update. Hats off to you

  120. Maham Liaqat says:

    Honestly no words….

  121. Revathi says:

    What a beautiful update!! I already read 3 times!! Every detail in this chapter is mind blowing!! The magic that you have with words is extra ordinary!!
    I am going to reread this chapter and the previous one many more times…
    Thank you for this lovely story…

  122. ineffablexx says:

    I am speechless.
    I don’t think there are any words that can describe the beauty of this chapter..from start to end it was a definition of perfect. I loved every bit of it and I am so so happy for them especially Manik and seeing how much he has changed. Nandini totally owned this chapter and the poem was so beautiful, you got all their emotions bang on.
    The tattoo thing was unexpected but it really shows the depth of Nandini’s love and for sure will make Manik fall in love with her even more!!
    I think I am gonna go and re read the chapter again X

  123. shygal9 says:

    Tounge Tied seriously 😍…God you are an awesome awesome writer…I know am being rediculous

  124. Anonymous says:

    I am speechless atm 😭🤧This was so beautiful.😍😭🤧💕

  125. Bhanu Pasupuleti says:

    OMG!! I can’t hold feeling the butterflies in my stomach while reading this chapter 🥰😘..
    Thank you Manita for being yourself writing such surreal emotions to keep us all bonded.

    Believe Me! when I say this… You’re a pristine hearted girl with creative thoughts to shine.

  126. Anglecute says:

    Such a beautiful chapter I loved it its awesome wow impressing I love the way nandu confess her feelings superb speechless like manik it’s awesome awesome awesome story brilliant

  127. Pooja says:

    Awwwww this is so romantic 🥰

    Many best parts in this story.. the entire confession thing starting from lighting the candles to the confession to the poem to getting inked… the fact that she won’t be going to Chennai and ofcourse the teasing parts… everything is so so beautiful 😍

    The missed calls from mom is still a mystery ..🧐

  128. Sheena says:

    This was so beautiful😍💓… How amazingly you have put it out in words… Loved it

  129. weirdfascinations says:

    Zaansche Schans! Just visited it 15 days ago! Beautiful place indeed.
    And about this chapter, like Manik, even I am bowled and knocked out!! I mean, Nandini is soooooooo romantic when she wants to! I can clearly see the changes in Manik because of Nandini. The way Manik was overthinking about Nandini loving him or not and him realising that her gestures are more than enough!!
    This story has its own pace, with the leads confessing after 60+ chapters, yet keeping the readers interested and excited!
    And the diary thing? Beyond beautiful.

  130. Khushboo Gupta says:

    Ohhhh Myyyy Gawdddddd..

    Like always kesa Matlab kesa manage karti hoo always OUT OF THE BOX♥️
    You BLOWN us.. I have no words to describe this…

    You made us speechless ..Nandu proposal is totally unimaginable..
    SUPER CUTEE manik is such Kiddo he iss…they way he say her to stop he can’t take it anymore ..HIS POOR HEART ♥️

    NOT ONLY HIS even my ..I can’t I mean you made it Soo PURE So SIMPlE yet BEST…ThAt tattoo Man. Set the bar Soo high naa…I can’t tell you how ADORABLE COUPLE THEY ARE they are GOALS ..

    or I can say you make them goals..
    Not only one Nandu bt Also MANIKK ..They are madly deeply hopelessly in love with EACH OTHER ♥️

    THEY ARE BEYOND ANYTHING..SO YOU ARE…YOU MADE ME BELIEVE IN LOVE CRAZILY..
    THAT LOVE CAN VE THIS SPECIAL ALSOO♥️

    THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS WONDERFUL STORY ..

    1. manitavb says:

      🤗🤗💖💖

  131. Anonymous says:

    Hey…u know i’ve been a silent reader of ur story fr quite a while…i don’t know it’s the wibe of this beautifully written ‘hopelessly romantic’ chapter or the fact that u’ve breathed so much of life in these fictional characters, that i couldn’t hold myself from telling you what an amazing artist you are! I’ve never read a love story which feels so real…so possible to happen…it’s the subtle things, the small details, the tiny moments you write that take our breath away every time we read it and that, i think, is the best any writer can achieve.
    So, more power to you! Keep shining, keep spreading love <3

    1. manitavb says:

      Thank you 🤗🤗

  132. Anonymous says:

    Awesomeeeee superrrrrr awwwwwwwwww cute love story ❤️❤️😍👌🥰😘😍❤️😊😊👍❤️😍😘👌🥰👌😍❤️❤️ Hope and wish even I could write one day like you❤️❤️❤️😍😘👌👌😍👌🥰🥰👌😘😍😍❤️❤️❤️

    1. manitavb says:

      💖💖🤗🤗

  133. myworldz_myrulz says:

    OMG… Such a blissful moment.. the way she confessed her feeling is Soo beautiful. Loved this part alot… Thanks for such an amazing part. Excellent job👏

    1. manitavb says:

      🤗🤗🤗

  134. Kiran says:

    Ohkayyyy I’m dead! When here I’m left so overwhelmed, I can’t imagine Manik’s condition. And the tattoo is like a Cherry on top. I thought Manik’s confession was WOW but Nandini’s confession easily beats that😍😍
    And she’s not leaving him and going to Chennai. Yayyyyyy💃💃💃

  135. Fatema says:

    Oh God I dont have words!! Te beauty ypu have in ypur stories is something of next level !!! Damn this was soo damn beautiful😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

    1. manitavb says:

      🤗🤗💖💖

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