Tangles & Ties: 53: All of You!

I thought I will be able to manage so I didn’t inform anyone that I was shifting my home this week. Thank you for all your lovely wishes. Love you …

I really assumed that it will be easy as I’m just shifting floors in the same house that I am currently living in. Previously I used to live on the ground floor and now I am shifting to the first floor. It seemed easy. But my God!! It is as messy and difficult as it would have been while going to another house. Previously, my evening clinic was 2 rooms in the front area of my home at base floor. Now, I am expanding it to take up the entire ground floor and now I will be living on the first floor. For last 2 nights, I wrote small parts and was so sure that I will be able to update but I couldn’t… posting it now, as I had written a large part already before shifting… and then whenever I got time… 

And guess what… it became a longggg update :))

 

 

 

He didn’t give her much time or chance to compose her action or think more. He simply tugged at her arm that held him, so that she lost her balance and staggered to fall over him.

“Instead… I have plans to pull you in…”

She couldn’t judge the movement and slipped to crash over him on the bed. Unprepared for the sudden tug on her arm, she had lost her balance and he had used that one moment to turn the tables.

She blushed and tried to get up, but was pulled back again, only to be held close by him with his one hand holding her hand and the other curled around her back. By a small eye movement, she requested him to let her go, but when he refused to pay heed to her request, she blushed more and made a pout in disapproval. Something about her was utterly cute and he wasn’t going to stop troubling her. Once again, she tried to get up using his shoulder for support. He smirked and flipped them, over the bed. Softly and carefully.

This time, she was lying on her back, with him over her. She frowned a little. Raising his brows victoriously, he pressed his lower lip under his upper lip. She twisted her lips as if she didn’t care. He lowered further to plant a soft kiss in the crook of her neck, making her wriggle. She tried to struggle out of his hold but all in vain. He was stronger than her and definitely more determined. When he showered fleeting kisses on her neck, alternating them with a row of crazy nuzzles, she knew that she had no more strength to fight him. His kisses on her neck were not only sexy but ticklish too.

Finally, when she could neither wiggle out of his hold nor stay immune to him, she giggled. “Stop it… Manik, please!”

He continued his foray till her jawline, refusing to let her go. “No way… someone was out there planning to push me in the canal. I want to show her what she will miss if she does that…”

“Miss you??? Go away. I would have been much better if I had taken a solo holiday!” She teased him.

He raised his neck, making a face, “You didn’t like this place? I planned so much for you!”

She sniggered, “Yeah…yeah…right!! Men and their plannings! It is rightly said that men understand only about ‘their’ needs… Selfish!”

“Selfish??  Did you just call me ‘selfish’???” He smacked his lips, annoyed like an injured tiger. She enjoyed every bit of it. He had had enough of his share of teasing her. Now, it was her turn.

“Oh yes! I just did! And of course, you are selfish… All you could think of was home-made food, gym, and TV while selecting a cottage for a honeymoon. Like really??”

He left her and sat on the bed, “Is it wrong if I think of spending a few days in peace?? The way I want! Everyone has a different way of relaxing.”

She raised herself too, sitting just beside him, deliberately irritating him, “Yeah… so that means – it’s ‘your’ holiday…right?? Away from the office and useless noise? What about me?”

He swayed his jaw, “You got a fairytale destination!! The way you always wanted it to be…”

“A fairytale in which the princess is still a maid… even after marrying the Prince Charming??”

He laughed at that, “You don’t become a maid if you work at home. And by the way, that is how realistic fairytales are!! So you know what to wish for…from now…”

She couldn’t hide her chuckle anymore, “How did you guess that I believe in fairytales and would love to have one? Coz we never talked about it before this trip.”

He smirked with a mocking look in his eyes and raked his hand in his hair, brushing them away from his face, “Ha!! It’s so obvious… by the kind of immature movies you watch, stupid books you read and the romantic music in your playlist…”

“Excuse me??!!!!” It wouldn’t have sounded demeaning if he hadn’t chuckled with that. The mocking look in his eyes and the tone, making fun of her choices truly irked her. Flaring her nostrils, she huffed, “Did you just call me ‘ ‘immature’?”

His hands were now locked behind his neck, resting lazily there, as if to even out the scores. Setting his feet on the ground, he stood up, “Oh yes! I just did!! Big deal??! You called me selfish!”

“You ARE selfish!” She stood up too.

“And You ARE immature.”

“So, you knew that already?! Why did you come to a holiday with this immature girl and planned all this?”

“Coz I am an idiot!” He gave her a tired stare and walked out of the room.

She followed him out, “But I am NOT an idiot. This beautiful village must have some hotels. I am going to check in one and live ten days of my life like a real princess!”

“Suit yourself!”He walked around the kitchen to fill a glass with water and gulped it down laboriously. He rested by the kitchen slab, stretching his long legs before him.

“What does that mean? I’ll go to the hotel and you will stay here??” She marched towards him and folded her arms across her front.

He shrugged carelessly, “Well… You want to go to a hotel. You go! I want to stay here…So, I’ll stay here!”

“Fine! I’ll go… and you enjoy your cottage here… cook, clean and enjoy your sleep…alone!”

“You too! Enjoy the luxuries of house-keeping and room-service, alone!”

She was irked and she could have spoken more but a knock on the glass door at the front disturbed them. The agency staff who had welcomed them before was on the door and asked them to accompany him to the reception for formalities.

The guy at the reception asked Manik to fill their details in a register and asked for their passport photocopies. When Manik was filling the details, Nandini observed the cute little reception and the beautiful flowers in the garden. Her attention was distracted when the reception guy told Manik that while booking online, the payment was rejected.

Manik was surprised. “How is this possible? I’ve received a confirmation of booking at my email.”

“Yes sir. We sent the confirmation which was subject to realization of payment which was later rejected. So we sent a follow up mail to you, but we didn’t receive any intimation from you.”

“But the amount was deducted from my bank account. And I didn’t receive any follow-up mail.”

Nandini stepped closer to him by this time and said, “It happens. Check your spam mail. Sometimes, official emails from hotels and commercial set-ups end up in spam.”

Manik checked his spam mail and found a mail from this accommodation agency that the payment was rejected and the booking was not confirmed now.

“I’m sorry. I missed this follow up mail.”

“It’s okay. We held the cottage for you, nevertheless. If you want, you can pay now.”

Manik thought for a moment and asked, “Thank you. The payment was withheld but you still continued to retain the cottage for us. That is a commendable gesture.”

“That’s our policy, Sir. The tourists should not suffer due to a technical glitch. In all circumstances, your comfort is our prime priority.”

“In that case… can I make a request?”

“Certainly, Sir!”

“Will you be able to arrange one suite room in one of the hotels which are linked to you?” Manik asked casually, as if it wasn’t even a big deal. Nandini immediately shot a glance in his direction. Manik was busy scanning the brochures kept at the display over the reception desk, trying to find a good hotel that suited them. When Nandini realised that  he was not even looking in her direction, she intervened, “No, we are good with the cottage.”

This time, Manik turned to her, confused at her changed stance. The reception guy had responded by then, “Sir, we have 3 hotel tie ups. If you want, we can arrange one for you…” Then he looked at Nandu as she had interrupted them and then he looked again at Manik, to ask, “Do you want me to find one??”

“Yes!”

“No!” Nandini firmly declared, almost at the same time. She turned to Manik, and stepped closer to him. Holding his arm this time, she said, “I love the view from the living room and the lawn…”

Manik gave her a stern stare, and nodded hopelessly, “We are getting the hotel!”

“We already have the cottage!” She raised one shoulder.

Twisting his lips, as if to say that he failed to understand her, Manik handed his credit card to the reception guy, and said, “Please deduct the amount. We’ll continue with the cottage!”

Once again, the card was rejected. The technical glitch did not allow the transaction to be completed. The receptionist tried twice, before he nodded with a click. “Sir, I think you should talk to your bank regarding this credit card. It seems to be blocked.”

“I’ll give you my international debit card.” Manik fished for the card from his wallet. But before he could take it out, he saw Nandini taking out her card from her handbag, “Here!”

The man took her card and tried again. Manik looked at Nandini and spread his hands in air, questioningly. She raised her brow, “Didn’t you say that you don’t mind if I pay at any place?”

“Yeahhhh…but…”

“But… nothing!” She declared raising her brows to close the discussion and took back the card when the guy deducted the said amount and returned both the receipt and card to her.

Manik treated her with a simple shrug and walked out after thanking the receptionist. Nandini stuffed her card and phone and receipt in her bag and followed Manik almost running behind him. The weather had grown colder by now. The breeze had been hitting hard, especially on the cheeks, nose and fingers. The night spread it’s dark sheets to cover the unassuming world on this side of the planet.

She walked faster like him… almost trying to walk next to him… almost failing!!
He was so tall… so agile… so quick!

She struggled to match steps with him. Hardly a few yards ahead, he eventually slowed down his steps to let her catch up. She heaved a relaxed breath making a pout of her plump lips, now  that she walked right beside him. He couldn’t stop grinning.

They kept walking towards the cottage without talking. When she rubbed her palms to ward off the growing cold, he slowly let his hand out of his long coat and held her hand in his own. His hand was so warm and assuring that she could feel the chill dissipating away from her. Her cold fingers seemed to melt inside the grip of his hand.

“Please… this one too…” She showed him, her left hand which was freezing in cold.

He smirked at the way she had requested him to take her left hand too in his grip. Swaying his jaw in a tease, and moving his tongue across his lower molars, he used his thumb to show her the door to the cottage. They had reached the cottage. With that he freed her right hand too, and said, “Sorry! Kindly warm your hands at the heaters provided in the cottage. I’m not available for such favours.”

He unlocked the door and pushed through it. She made an irked face, “Jerk! You are so… ”

“Selfish??” He completed it for her, tucking his lower lip inside his mouth, “Didn’t you call me that?? An hour ago?? Why do you want my specialised services now?”

She rolled her eyes, entering the cottage behind him, complaining like a baby, “Now, you will say that I am complaining and expecting things… but the truth is that you ARE mean!! And very selfish! And I was so right when I called you selfish. See, my hand are sooooo cold! Can’t you just take them in your hands??”

He smirked, thrusting his hands visibly inside the pockets of his jacket, “Of course! I CAN do that… If ONLY… you take your words back and say that I am not selfish and instead, you accept that you are immature!”

“Keep dreaming!” She rolled her eyes.

“See! Immature!”

“No! That’s ‘you’… not me! You always do what you feel like. You decide terms and conditions of our marriage and get to break all of them, one by one… and you call me ‘immature’…”

“Wow!! So in every fight, you will bring back the ENTIRE past, starting from day 1 ??”

“Why not? You are being so mean from Day One !!! And even if you want to skip that…we can talk about this trip too…”

“Go on!” He yawned, and slightly rested by the headrest of the living room couch, just facing her and signaled her to go on… letting her speak.

Irked, she pointed her index finger at him, “First, you skip Paris and Rome because you don’t want to scurry around looking at heritage buildings and touristy places. You want to sleep even on a holiday. Next, even in a country where you ‘thought’ there won’t be many places to visit, you skip Amsterdam and choose a remote village. Look at me!! I’m happy even with that… My God… how mature and understanding a wife can be !!! And even here, you chose a cottage…why?? Because you want YOUR comforts… YOUR routine… YOUR relaxation…Tell me… Who is selfish here and who is immature here??”

He narrowed his eyes and murmured softly, “Don’t you dare point your finger at me.”

“Oh yeah??? What if I do?”

“Don’t challenge me!!” He immediately straightened himself, held her finger and curled his palm around her entire hand, carefully enclosing her tiny hand in his huge one. He, then, twisted her arm to take it at her back, thereby bringing her close to him. One simple move brought them so close in proximity that they could hear each other breathe. Their hands stayed locked at her back, and their faces were inches away. She could see him gulp harder with his eyes fixed on her.

He was a charming puzzle. On one hand, he fought fiercely with her and on the other hand, his eyes were always checking her out. She had felt his heated gaze on her so many times, leaving her cheeks blushing and pulse throbbing. He looked at her as if he could consume her as a whole and still won’t feel enough of her. But on the surface, he stayed non-chalant and difficult. He was so enigmatic and mysterious that she didn’t know how he will manipulate things to get his way, still making her feel as if it was her who was receiving the special treatement. His dark eyes were a pool of chocolate… dark, bittersweet and addictive… enticing her every moment to indulge in them.

She appeared to be lost in his eyes. The spell broke when he blinked once.

“Your charm won’t work on me!” She teased.

“Sorry, I called you only immature… that was so less… In fact, you are ungrateful too.”

“Ungrateful?”

He bent closer to her, as if he couldn’t resist hearing her breathe or trying to smell her perfume. Softly, he murmured, “I planned so much for you… googled the fairytale villages…”

“Googled?? … So… that friend in embassy?”

“She just helped with the visa… nothing else!”

Nandini could’t stop a visible display of glee on her face in form of a crazy chuckle.

“See!! How happy you are!”

Her eyes twinkled as she spoke and her voice didn’t even hide that thrill. “Obviously! I like that. On that note, I forgive you. You googled for beautiful, fairytale-like places for this immature wife?? Awwww!!!”

He held her other hand too and curled it behind her back, taking both her hands in his own, behind her. She was tucked to him now and he couln’t be more thrilled.

He gave her a lopsided click of his lips, “But, what’s the use… you didn’t like it!!”

She sighed, “Manik… I loved it! But I still want to know the reason behind choosing a remote village instead of happening destinations and then choosing this cottage instead of a comfortable hotel.”

He loosened his hold on her hands but not on her. Slowly, he slid his hands up towards her elbows, while she was still tucked to him, so close that he could hear heartbeat. Not removing his eyes from her, he sighed. He brought her closer and squeezed her shoulders to bring her so close that even air escaped the space between them.

“You really want to know?”

“Yes!” She sighed.

He sighed too, and whispered, just before softly brushing his lips over hers.

“I wanted all of you… your time, your attention, your focus… all for me! Yes, I am selfish!!”

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183 Comments Add yours

  1. Sargum95 says:

    Hey di… Was busy on hetcic schedule.. now started reading tangle and ties again… But didnt receive password for the chapter… Plss mail it…

    1. manitavb says:

      password: mature

  2. I loved it… The way u cast magic spell on us using the words so beautifully… I really couldn’t stop myself to follow u here… I cam to know that u continued writing here just two days back.. Nd u couldnt be more happier… This is one of my fav books… The most beautiful one I must say… ❤❤❤❤

    1. manitavb says:

      Thank you so much. I’m overwhelmed with the response.
      Stay blessed 🤗💖

  3. khurshidashaikh says:

    amazing🙆🙆

  4. M. Kalyani says:

    How to read protected chapters….?

    1. manitavb says:

      password : mature

  5. akupnegi00 says:

    I adore even there bickeringssss😂💞😭😭❤❤ They are trully love. And reading your books make me fall in love with them all over moreeee❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😭😭😭😭😭
    Love youuu
    ~ Sonali112

  6. akupnegi00 says:

    I cant find chapter 54 of tangles and ties di😭😭

    1. manitavb says:

      Go to the top menu – click on Begin here – all books are there… click on tangles and ties… all chapters are collected in one place – Chapter 54 is password protected / password – mature

      1. akupnegi00 says:

        Thank you sooooooo soooooo much diii❤❤

  7. Anonymous says:

    I just loved their nok-jhok….they are so cute😍😍😍😂😂…nandu is really a chatterbox🤣🤣but her words are always sensible she doesn’t talk nonsense at all n i really love it when she keeps talking nonstop…well u will think i am crazy🙈😂😂….n yes your last lines are always amazing & heart touching♥️

    1. manitavb says:

      Thank you so much.
      Please write just your name or wattpad id for me to know who I am talking to.
      Lots of love 🙂

  8. Deepa says:

    So romantic and so cute thoughts of manik. Wives ko Ghar ki routine life se freedom Chahiye Hoti hai isliye jab wo bahar Jate hai to hotels me stay Karna prefer Karti hai but husband privacy chahte hai kyunki koi unhe disturb na kare yahi soch ke manik ye sab plan Kiya hoga

  9. Smiley khan says:

    Hey di I couldn’t get the next chapter 😫😫😫😫

  10. Rosann says:

    Omgoooshhh 😍😍😍😍😈 the mini non talkative devil is sooo much loouueee 😭😭💏💏💏- uff all attention everything ☺️☺️😜

  11. Rasika says:

    Hii dear i have subscribed but didn’t get any pwd so facimg problem in reading story further.
    please help

    1. manitavb says:

      password : mature

  12. Isha says:

    My heart flutters and there is this smile always on my face reading your story! ❤️MaNan will be super close ❤️😍

  13. Rakhi says:

    My heart flattered at the last line!😍♥
    How much I love your one liners!🤗🤩❣️

    1. Anonymous says:

      I subscribed to the site but haven’t received password for chapter 54 onwards.please help me with same.

      1. manitavb says:

        password is : mature

  14. Sruthi Reddy says:

    Please help me to log in 54 the part , yesterday I couldn’t able to see ur mso and missed mature post now it is not available  please diI help me to read next part

    1. manitavb says:

      enter the password – mature

  15. taurean82 says:

    Hey I am travelling…so just read this chapter….so Manik finally told her the reason…now Nandini will have no complaints 😃

  16. anjana says:

    kindly notify me for nxt chapter.i cant subscribe in wordpress.dont know y.i dont get any notifications.i have given my mail id in contact form .pls help me..  everyday i login to this website manitav.net and find for chapters …do something pls 🙃

    1. manitavb says:

      Don’t worry, I’ll add you

    2. Shuguftha says:

      Still am unable to open 53 n 54 chapter and I didnt receive password

      1. manitavb says:

        Ch 53 is open for all
        Ch 54 and 55 are password protected. Password : mature
        Type ‘mature’ and enter

  17. Yogita123 says:

    Not able find next chap

  18. Yogita123 says:

    Not able to read next chap

  19. Sandy sharma says:

    When we’ll get the update ??

  20. Haaye most loving part dii 😍😍
    waiting for next part ❤

  21. Krutika says:

    Please update the next part🧡
     

  22. ritu says:

    not able to read

  23. ritu says:

    not able to read next part

  24. ritu says:

    not sble to read next part

  25. Ayshu says:

    Manik surely kniws to charm and woo girls, lovely update 

  26. Ayshu says:

    I didn’t get the password for next part 

  27. suparnap12 says:

    It’s amazing.. waiting for your next update

  28. Aarti says:

    Its amazing

  29. Subexya says:

    It’s amazing 😍.. I loved it dear
    But I didn’t get the password for next chapter.

  30. Christina Eappen says:

    Such a beautiful update. The way they fight with each other, tease each other, the need for each other’s attention is just so adorable. They just look so cute. I wish to have a husband like that but life is not a fairytale always. Lets see what type of a person I will get.
    Di how will i get the password for the next chapter?

  31. Ms.pagal says:

    Aww this is so cute and love ly
     

  32. Aastha Sondarva says:

    I don’t know why I wasn’t able to comment yesterday due to login or idk something issues!! But woaaowww the chapter was absolutely amazing and now I notice that you’ve also changed this comment section where now we can bold italics our font and add photos too!! Wow!!! Hats off to you di!!! You are seriously taking so so so much pains!!!

  33. minal says:

    Have u updated ch54

  34. Sumaia says:

    Manik is cute he want all her attention I wonder how will manage once she will shift to Chennai 😂
    But to be honest he is more like who want comfortable even when it come to travel 😂       

  35. Unnati limbachiya says:

    Awesome superb dear I love it waiting for ur next update

  36. Prabha Returi says:

    Yet another lovely update Manita. Can’t wait to read the next one.

  37. ANJALI says:

    Sooooooo cuteeeeeeeeee….Selfish and immature 😜Just tooooo good…i got this site today …finally will b able to read ur stories..keep it up….so sooo proud of u.😚😚

  38. Yohannacorin says:

    Cute Fights and discussions with Lots of Love…. I got carried away by Manik’s direct Confession….. 😘😘Eager to read next✌️✌️

  39. Geeta says:

    😚😘That was way too beautiful.. this melted my heart  .. Love their talk ..manik is goals😍 how can anyone not love him .. thet are too cute

  40. Arooj1991 says:

    ❤❤

  41. muskangarg309gmailcom says:

    Dii will you update tonight?

  42. Madhuri53 says:

    Uffff…..so much arguing they are…..I thought the update will end with their fighting. It started with his reading and whole update they argued over small small things. Each of them accused something or other. I felt bad that they came on honeymoon and fighting like thus. Yheir banter over selfish and immature was funny.
    But glad that finally Manik told her why he chose cottage over hotel.  He just won myvhemy over his confession at the ebd of the update. Let’s see how they enjoy their honeymoon.

  43. guneet sawhney says:

    Aweeeee I just luvd this manik so verbal abt his feelings hope they confess soon
     

  44. mohini says:

    Thank you so much dear for continuing the story! 
    And loved the update it is seriously amazing keep it up dear always there to support you! ❤❤

  45. manvin488 says:

    Ohh  that was so beautiful !! Manik is just ❤.They are just goals 🙌 And we should be thanking you right, the way u potray their character is just awesomeeee… Plz add me when you make your chapters protected. 

  46. Kiran says:

    They are so cute!!!!I just love the way they behave immaturely yet so mature!!! #relationshipgoals

  47. maniknandini1 says:

    This one liners…. You will laugh when I tell you.. I first read the liner scrolling down first and then read the update…again I never satisfy myself by reading the update once I read it again and again.. 🙈 loved the update soo much Di… Everyone says opposite attracts.. But no one states how beautifully they get along… You describe every situation soo beautifully.. ❤ I am falling in love with your story more than before after every update.. 💖 loved the update soo much..

    Ps- gonna make my future husband read this story once.. Cause MaNan are really couple goals.. 💕

  48. sanny says:

    I am in love with this story
    Please add me when you make your chapters protected

  49. Amela Khan says:

    Wow amazing chapter
    Last line taken away my heart he is sweetheart 😍😍
    Love u for this 

  50. Veni says:

    Awesome part, i really really love the way u end each chapter…….this story is very very different frm the usual arranged marriage stories……u r penning it down amazingly. Plse do add me when u make ur chapters protected 🙂

  51. Anu Anil says:

    I am in love with ur one liners at the end. Small small arguments make their relationship more beautiful. Thank u for this lovely update.. ❤❤

  52. S2lover2S says:

    😍😍😍its just soo niceee

  53. Meher says:

    Loved it . You story has become kind of addiction to me…thoroughly enjoyed …waiting for the next chapter eagerly

    1. manitavb says:

      Writing it is an addiction for me too. I feel something is missing when I don’t write 🙂

  54. Reshmi kaul says:

    😍😍😍 where is the nxt part? 

    1. manitavb says:

      I haven’t posted rey…. just last night I posted this one… Next part is tomorrow as I need to send passwords to people 🙂

  55. pixiepari says:

    awwww…how romantic of himm….muhahhhhhh

    1. manitavb says:

      😉😋

      1. pixiepari says:

        recognised me dii

  56. Gursheen Chadha says:

    One of my favourite chapters.😍

  57. Sadhana143 says:

    Tq so much for continuing the story dear.. I always loved the way u portray the characters so beautifully… It was very blissfully reading ur stories… Eagerly waiting for the next part… 😘

  58. Sanskrutisutar says:

    The last line just made my day.Manik seems to soooo smitten by her 😁😁😁. 
    Your story are just Soo beautiful and simple I just love them 

  59. Drishti says:

    Damn this is amazing… In love with this 😘

  60. krinal310 says:

    I took one ss bcz I loved that part so much, sorry if u feel that I did it for some purpose 🤗

  61. Pk says:

    When will you update the next part….eagerly waiting😍

  62. Shilpa1 says:

    Awesome update 

  63. ANSHDHA RATHORE says:

    The last line just made my day!!!!!!! I love this manik! Totally smitten with his wife!!

  64. krinal310 says:

    So sooooooooo beautiful chappy. I loved it ❤️❤️❤️

  65. ANSHDHA RATHORE says:

    I sooo wanted to comment….. 
    God di… How on Earth do you even find such beautiful lines to pen down the emotions??? I mean… 😍.. ” His dark eyes were a pool of chocolate….dark, bittersweet and addictive… enticing her every moment to indulge in them” 
    …I’m sooo smitten with this line!! U know, u r my favorite, most favorite writer manita di. And I so wait for every update to ur story. I came across ur story first time on wattpad with tangles and ties, and I’m sooo impressed that I even want to read ur other stories like twisted minds, spark and spice, fire and ice too. And I’m lucky u changed the platform because now ur other stories are also available to read which u earlier deleted from Wattpad. I’m so so happy. Thank you so much. 
    Wattpad id: Anshdha_Rathore
    Also, pls help! I don’t understand this system. Earlier when I subscribed to this site I subscribed to ur manitav blog and I was asked for some password too. then onwards I was getting all notifications and updates of stories. It’s okay. But I so want to comment on your stories and I just am not able to like or comment on ur story. I’m trying since last night, then I made a WordPress account now and put a password there also. Now I’m able to like your story but not able to comment again. Do I need to put down my name and email each and every time i try to  comment???? Because when I went to “join the discussion” then also I’m not able to login using my WordPress account. Just stuck here. 
     

    1. shygal9 says:

      Same happened with me too..i think we have to put our names and email every we comment..i also wasn’t able to login i told manita di too..I am also stuck..

  66. priyakshi says:

    This was such a beautiful chapter. No matter how long your chapters are, by the time I reach the end of it, I always wish for it to be a longer..

  67. chandrasan says:

    The best part is though they fight, argue for everything they can’t stay away from each other. She told him that she gonna look for a hotel impulsively but when he asked abt it she backed off 😂😂 and same goes to him he was angry when she called him selfish but he is selfish to get all her attention and love. Conclusion: they want to stick to each other no matter what ❤❤

  68. muskangarg309gmailcom says:

    Totally mind blowing start of honeymoon. Let’s see what’s next . Totally Love reading fights of not so sweet couple . I liked the reason of Manik being selfish. This shows how deeply he thinks and believes for Nandini and this relationship.

  69. Chahate says:

    Awesome chapter 👌😍

  70. chandrasan says:

    Though he confessed at the end but it came after all the fights. It’s like when a problem is going to touch its peak he confess. May be this is the reason his character is different from regular one. His way of reacting to things is totally different!!!!!

    1. ANSHDHA RATHORE says:

      Exactly I think so too. His character is completely different because of this reason only. Like he said himself, he doesn’t know which ball to play and which to duck… He still needs to learn how to express.

  71. chandrasan says:

    My question was answered by you with that last one liner 😍😍❤ he wants her full attention and love👏👏👏😍😍 still what made him to lie abt googling for fairy tale village he could have already told her that he did for her!!! Did he mentioned his friend just to make her jealous or he don’t want to show his efforts for her?

  72. Priti says:

    I’m not getting any email to confirm my subscription even though I have been subscribed it how will I get the password then please help

  73. chandrasan says:

    Where to start no am not confused to start when it comes to T&T 😜 she wanted to throw him but he wants to pull her in. They behave like Tom & cherry 😂😂😍🤣 this phase I feel like watching two best friends who like to irritate and mock each other which made me realize your partner should be ur best friend ❤ one thing di nandini knows him that he can’t be selfish though her explanation is justified (like choosing remote village, cottage) but that selfish word is something serious. She should know him at least he is not selfish henna? Am I getting it wrong?

  74. Minu says:

    Hey I want help in joining here. Because I did received email notification for your story but not the password and not being able to login.
    Please help.

  75. Aisha says:

    Hey! Have you already sent the password to everyone? Becoz I didn’t receive one. 
    Actually, I don’t recirec your update notification anymore. I got it in the first chapter, but later, No! Even tgthou I’ve already subscribed. 
    Thanks. 

  76. bhavika_28 says:

    💖💖💖

    1. manitavb says:

      😊😘

  77. Megha Soni says:

    Awesome update 
    Loved it 

    1. manitavb says:

      😊😘

  78. Heaven to hell says:

    Asw… He is so cute😍😍… I already said… They are perfect for eachother… They tease like teenager and love like mature couple 😍😍

    1. manitavb says:

      😊😘😍

  79. ajita31 says:

    I didn’t receive any password

    1. manitavb says:

      Read the last part of the update about password, again …
       

    2. manitavb says:

      I haven’t posted any update and didn’t send any password till now 🙂

  80. Pritam says:

    Awesome update

  81. luv_u_zindagi says:

    Their teasing session was the sight to watch.. so childish and cute 😍

    1. manitavb says:

      😍😘

  82. Mudita jain says:

    As I always say your one liners at the end just takes away my heart every time
    And ya just loved the way manik said he is selfish 
    Soooo cute🤩🤩🤩

    1. manitavb says:

      It’s not wrong to be selfish…if you mean like that 😅

  83. Anagha says:

    Manik’s idea is so cute 
    Awesome update yaar loved it 

    1. manitavb says:

      😍😍

  84. Priyanka Vishwambhar says:

    I really love the way he teases her and her reaction is super cute 😍😍

  85. Kalpana says:

    Yaar i didn’t received any password 

    1. manitavb says:

      I haven’t sent any 🙂

  86. Kalpana says:

    Awesome update. They r fighting worst than kids yaar but iIlove their sweer si fightings and teases. Waiting for the next part eagerly

    1. manitavb says:

      Soon 😊

  87. Pooja says:

    Amazing update 😍 while I read the update I myself end up blushing so hard .. 🙈somehow we see a different side of Manik when he is with Nandini.. 😍❤️ just the credit card part seems to have a backstory 😐 hope it isn’t related to his office ☹️ but now we wil push it all behind and enjoy the current track which seems interesting and exciting at same time

    1. manitavb says:

      You are right Pooja, Manik is different when he is with Nandini. She compels him to react, respond, act and think… she is a constant spark in his otherwise monotonous life 🙂

  88. anglecute says:

    Superb update wow manik na such a cutie pie nd my nandu too
    Kitna achi fight karty hain dono 😀😀😊😊lovely nd di apki last ki one line jo hoti hay na bohat hi awesome hoti hay

    1. manitavb says:

      Thank you dear 😘

  89. Kavitha says:

    Superb way the story is proceeding..manita u really have a way of taking Ur story.. something unique .love it.

    1. manitavb says:

      Thank you Kavitha 😘

  90. Arpi says:

    Awesome update loved it

    1. manitavb says:

      😊😘

  91. Anum says:

    Haye yeh dono yaha bhi fight krhe hain
    Cutie bacheee 
    Very nice update 

    1. manitavb says:

      They can’t stop fighting… even at far end of the world 😅

  92. Sanika Karambelkar says:

    Just loved it! Amazing! 

    1. manitavb says:

      😊😘

  93. nishat_rahman says:

    Such a beautiful chapter indeed! MaNan & the phases of their relationships, be it their daily routine phases or this honeymoon one; it has another level of charm in it. & their marriage is  like a stepping stone, one aspect of a long-term evolution between two people who have, for whatever reason, decided to take a leap of faith and say, “Hey, this is the person whom I want to try with for the rest of my life” 
    u have penned down it so beautifully that I can totally visualize PaNi in the knokjhonk of MaNan. 

    1. manitavb says:

      Thank you Nishat. It means a lot to any writer if the readers can visualize the characters and relate to them.

      You are right. When you know that you want to spend your life with someone, you begin to make subtle changes…hence the slow evolution and growth… 

  94. Shanvi says:

    I don’t receive password 😌☹️

    1. manitavb says:

      I haven’t sent it dear 😊

  95. banshri rana says:

    I’m facing error issues while subscribing plz tell me how to send u email & where is the link I’m not getting? 

  96. shygal9 says:

    Am i subscribed now..is my account ok?
    Manita Di.. you are understanding na wat am saying 🤐

  97. shygal9 says:

    Hello

  98. mf0316134 says:

    Waiting for next part…..diii😍😍

  99. Nainanaeem says:

    Loved it to the core😍😍♥️♥️
     

  100. shadivz says:

    You write so beautifully. I can feel them come alive in front of me. The update was uber cute. They love to pull each others legs all the time. Love their silly fights.
     

  101. manitavb says:

    Thank you for the likes and lovely replies…

    Good night everyone. Going to sleep now!

    Will reply to next comments tomorrow… Sweet dreams 😘

  102. Kosurisravya27 says:

    Didi I have subscription but didn’t get any mail related to password. Can u plzz help me….plzz
     

    1. manitavb says:

      I have not posted the next part or the password yet… I will do that with next post… if you get email notifications of my updates… you will get a password

  103. Tarana Satwath says:

    Fighting and romance simultaneous.. one min they are fighting and accusing and other min romance.. atlast he confessed the reason.. my heart is bursting  with so  much happiness  after knowing reason.. lovely update!! Thanq!!

    1. manitavb says:

      Haha… yeah… that is Manan bond… fights are the means to come closer :))

  104. Anonymous says:

    Amazinggg😍

    1. manitavb says:

      😍😘

      Your name is coming as anonymous… I would love to know your wattpad id 🙂

  105. Kiran Arora(Rat_Sam) says:

    I’ll not talk about the story. Because the beauty doesn’t need words to tell.
    I’ll talk about your skills. Don’t take as it has no beauty, but as I want to appreciate your work, your sincerity it shows in the way you pen it. It’s commendable. I just ❣️. Every day w8ing for the next update. Keep posting. I’m one of your Wattpad follower.

    1. manitavb says:

      That is so sweet of you.
      I don’t know what to say…
      Thank you dear!

  106. Aaliyamanan says:

    Loved it

    1. manitavb says:

      😍😘

  107. KUDRAT says:

    Didi thank you for the update…
    Aaj ka episode bhott kmaal ka thaa…
    Nd Mera subscription m error aa rhaa h to please aap muje whatpadd k message box m password bej denaa…
    Orrr Didi please password bej denaa..
    Kyoki m raat m pedne s phle aapki story jror pedti Hoon…
    Orrr ager Kal password nhi Mila to fir pedne m naa mannnn lgega or na hi nind aaegi 
    To please dhyaan s “password” d denaa 
    Thank you Didiii 😘
    Orr ha please apna dhyaan rekhna ❤️
    Love you for the manan story writing 💞

    1. manitavb says:

      Sweetie, there are roughly 1200+ subscribers to this blog… I can’t … I really really can’t send passwords to each of you…  I can only send a group email… to all the email-ids registered here…
      Send me your email id… I’ll add it from backend.. 

  108. khushboogupta01 says:

    Awww that was super cutee..they know how to.irritate each other n how to make each other happy ..so much into love with this couple they manage to bring smile on.each other face n that last line is chapter stealer you know how make us wait for the next one.. living such lines..

    1. manitavb says:

      Maybe, that’s because they deeply care about each other 😊

      Thanks. 😘

      1. khushboogupta01 says:

        Yeahh correct ❤️

  109. Shaharin Shimu says:

    Awesome chapter

    1. manitavb says:

      😊😘

  110. myworld_myrulz says:

    Awww…. How cute… Someone is being naughty 😉. He googled it for her that’s sooo nice.. chemistry between them is peaks… Loved their silly fights… All over I loved the update❤️

    1. manitavb says:

      She brings out many shades in him… being naughty is one of them 🙈😋Thank you😊

  111. Kshamaapurva says:

    The chemistry….loved it. Nandu – Manik 😇😍🤗😘.
    I just adore your writing….

    1. manitavb says:

      Thank you 🤗🤗💖💖

  112. Diksha says:

    ❤❤

    1. manitavb says:

      😍😘

  113. HIMABINDU says:

    Awesome…. .This was so amazing…. U can just feel thr chemistry in netween them while reading only… 

    1. manitavb says:

      If you could feel what they feel, a lot of my job is done 💖💖

  114. Fatema says:

    How tl read the next part???? I didn’t get it.?

    1. manitavb says:

      I haven’t posted the next part yet…when I post… it will be password protected

  115. Priya says:

    Beautiful chapter…I was wondering they will be arguing like this throughout their honeymoon and thank God finally manik started to confess…Love you di for such beautiful updates and also for beautiful cliff hangers…

    1. manitavb says:

      They can’t stay without arguing 😋… and they can’t stay away too 😉

      That sums up their relationship 😄

      Thank you!

  116. Fatema says:

    Wow! Their ssmall small fights make thrir relationship more strong n beautiful 😍f

    1. manitavb says:

      Yes… too much of romance makes it boring and too many fights make a relationship depressing…according to me…

      Manan create a perfect balance 😋😉

  117. lovelyrashu says:

    Loved the update and like finally manik confessed the real reason for choosing the remote location 😍 seriously I am officially jealous of nandini for getting someone so caring loving and supportive guy like manik can’t believe he is the same guy setting conditions for getting married. Absolutely loved their teasing banter and don’t know if its a big thing or not but why was manik’s credit card blocked😯. Hope there isn’t any problem in his office. Waiting for tomorrow to come sooner 😉.

    1. manitavb says:

      Same guy who was setting conditions coz he was scared of relationships and broke them himself… 😅

      Credit card issue – it will come up ahead… not so serious…not so soon! Relax! 

      Thank you 😘

  118. hinuthakkar11 says:

    Haha such a cute chapter😂😂❤️❤️one minute they fight another minute they get lost in each other😂🙈nd their fights are worth watching🤣🤣🤣he is totally crazily in love with her😁😁like for her he googled everything that is related to some fairytale😭❤️how deeply he observes her nd tried to fulfil her wish😍😍😍kitna cute hai ye banda😚nd as always the last line hayee🙈🙈

    1. manitavb says:

      Yeah… he is crazy in love and observes her deeply. She is crazy in love too and can’t stay away from him…whether they fight, stay quiet or romance… she has to be around him…

      Thank you 😍

  119. Keyura says:

    I am in love with your one liners at the end…thank you for the long update despite of your busy schedule

    1. manitavb says:

      Thank you dear… I update because I love to write something before I go to sleep. Thanks for reading it 😊

  120. Priyanka Biswal says:

    Love the part didu, waitting 4 the nxt one,

    1. manitavb says:

      Thank you😊

  121. ~Shiv~ says:

    Manik boy! You are so smitten by your wife 😆 One thing I look forward to and very fond of is how you tie up the title, the essence of the chapter with the last line of the update. Just like icing on the cake ❤️

    PS – The credit card glitch sounds like trouble.. is it linked to his company account?

    1. manitavb says:

      Thank you for pointing out what you like most. I do that consciously so I feel glad that you liked the integration of the title, last line and the chapter essence. Thanks! 

      @ Credit card issue – I liked your observation! 😊

      1. ~Shiv~ says:

        Alright.. so I’m probably not thinking too much and it IS headed somewhere.. really curious now 😀

  122. piya66 says:

    Beautiful chapter ❤️

    1. manitavb says:

      😚😊

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