Tangles & Ties: 52: The New Abode

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{ Lots of pictures in this part }



He hadn’t said it just for the heck of it. It was indeed a village which would qualify to be one of the most beautiful places on the earth, thus earning the name of the ‘fairytale village of Netherlands’ and even the Venice of Netherlands.

They crossed several houses, cottages, canal side cafes and restaurants and rental accomodations as hotels on the way.


There were absolutely no cars in the city. There were only waterways and canals to travel the city by boat or if someone didn’t want to use the canal, they would walk through narrow pathways or use a bicycle.

Designed in Medieval architecture, the cottages with thatched roofs and huge gardens facing the canal looked untouched by the ruins of urban modernity. Nature was still at it’s rugged best here. The trees, the flora added to the serene appeal of the small noiseless village.

Excited, Nandini slipped her arm around his elbow, observing the surroundings with utmost curiosity. “Manik… who told you about this place? I’ve never heard it’s name or about it’s existence, before. I could have never imagined about such a place. Not even in my dreams. Do you know how I am feeling right now?”

“No…tell me…”

“Right now, I feel as if I am inside the movie of my life, starring us!”

He chuckled and touched her forehead, “Are you fine? Sometimes, you talk as if you are on weed.”

She giggled, “I would have thought so too… it’s sooooo exotic! Is it even real!!”

“Yeah… it is…” He replied seriously.

She laughed more, “Oh God! Silly boy… you were not supposed to answer that. It was an expression of surprise… not a question…”

He huffed and nodded disapprovingly, “Someday, you need to teach me all those expressions… how to talk…what to reply and what to just agree to… basically, which ball to play and which one to duck…”

She couldn’t stop laughing and leaned closer to him, holding his elbow, “That is my responsibility… I’ll do that at priority!”

“Thank you!” He twisted his lips and signaled an approval when he was informed about the destination.

“Have we reached?” Nandini asked, standing up and looking around.

“Yep!” Manik jumped out of the boat first and gave his hand to her, so that she could hold him and step out. For this one moment, when she had held his hand casually, he clutched her fingers strongly so that she didn’t topple over and fall down in water. She didn’t have to hold him. He did it for both of them and before she could step out, he curled his other arm around her waist and nearly lifted her to help her jump out of the boat.

She almost landed crashing on him while he held his feet firm on the ground for both of them to be balanced. If this was not a sign of ‘care’… she didn’t know what this word meant… She smiled gracefully and whispered, “Thank you!”

“Anytime!” He whispered back.

“Where is the hotel?” She asked turning around and looking at age old thatched roof cottages with a beautiful lawn in each area.

he pointed towards a cottage and explained, “This is a cottage, rented by the accomodation providers. No stereotypic hotel…”



Nandini observed the beautiful cottage and her heart stopped with a ‘thud’ sound for a moment. It was unbelievably gorgeous. “Ah-mazingg!! But… Isn’t it … like really huge?”

“Yeah… this was only available at this short duration. I saw the pics on google and selected it. It is meant for two families, but I booked the entire thing for us to have some privacy. And yeah, you asked, how I knew about this place…” he lifted his brow teasingly and added, almost reminding her, “The same friend at that embassy?? She helped in selection and suggested Giethoorn when I asked about a honeymoon destination in the Netherlands.”

He could clearly see her seething in jealousy. She licked her dried lips with her tongue and murmured in a sarcastic tone, “Oh My God!!! You didn’t bring ‘her’ along?? She could have been a greeeaaattt ‘HELP’ since I can see how massively she helped you in getting the visa and selecting the destination…”

Immediately, he spoke, in a serious tone, “Oh shit!!”


“I didn’t even ask her. Sounds rude right? You are so correct. We could have brought her along!”

This time she tilted her chin up, twisted her lips as she pursed them together and squeezed her eyes so angrily that he couldn’t stop himself from holding her nose and slightly shaking her. With a peal of teasing laughter, he said, “Sarcasm… haaann???!!! We can play this game if you want… but let me tell you madam… that I will always win!”

He picked up his bag and dragged his trolley as he showed her the direction. She huffed and puffed a huge bout of air and followed him, dragging her trolley bag. “Someday, I’ll be the reason for your bruised arms, for the whacking you are going to get from me!”

He laughed loudly and without turning towards the back, he replied, “I would love that…”

He walked inside and waited for her to follow him before they were greeted by a staff of the agency that rented these cottages. Thankfully, the staff, a man in his sixties, spoke English. He instructed them to follow him and gave him a tour of the house, the interiors and the surroundings. After that the guy left telling them to join him at a nearby cottage for formalities etc as that was the reception and central office of the agency.



When they were left alone, Nandini raised her brows disbelievingly, “Living room…gym… kitchen??? What is that even?? Our home?”

“Our new abode!”

“Looks like a new home where we shifted today!”

“That is how it is supposed to be in a rental cottage…” He shrugged, dumping his luggage in one corner.

“Wow!!” She nodded, without trying to sound mean, “Isn’t a hotel a better option?? I mean, there is room-service, all day cafe and restaurant, house-keeping services and so much at your disposal… you can actually enjoy a holiday…”

He shrugged carelessly, “By every means… Even this is a holiday!!”

She chuckled, trying harder not to sound disappointed, and walked closer to him. Softly, she spoke, “Really Manik?? What is your idea of a holiday?? Just change of location???”

He smiled and rolled his eyes, “Honestly… if you ask me… I’ve never had an idea of a holiday. In fact, this is my first holiday after we stopped going with mom dad, for out-station excursions. Never thought about a holiday before. Whatever travel it was before this, was business and deal.”

She almost forgave him. Who wouldn’t?!

When he accepted everything about him so honestly. Every flaw, every inexperience…

“You don’t like it?” He became serious.

“I love it… theoretically, it’s perfect!” She had to be honest too. When someone is honest with you, then the least you can do for him is give him the same respect and be honest with him. So, she stuck to what she had felt about it. “It’s so gorgeous…right out of a fairytale or a movie… like a said… and then suddenly the picture gets messy and blurred when I imagine myself cleaning the washroom, making the bed every day and cooking!…Β  Like… we could have taken a break from that routine for a few days… by opting for a hotel…”

He nodded, “I know that… but I can’t eat hotel food or outside food for so long… straight ten days…”

Her husband was hopeless… and so was she…

Teasingly, she replied as she walked away, taking her trolley inside the bedroom. “I can see how you actually have a clear idea of a holiday, dear hubby!! Gym, kitchen, TV… nothing to actually keep me indulging in site seeing or behaving like a tourist… what else?? …”

He smirked and followed her inside the bedroom and almost throwing himself on the bed, he sprawled on the bed with his hands and legs stretched out. She was still gawking at him when he chuckled more, looking at the shocked expressions on her face – Mouth open, eyes popped out and a visible movement of her chest when a heavy bout of air exited her lungs, excaping through the pout of her lips.

He couldn’t have loved any other sight more than this. He replied with another tease, “Sleeping!”




Nandini winced and frowned, “Puhhleaaseee!”

Manik knew that she was getting irked now and her taut muscles and clenched jaw were worth every whack, so he took another chance at teasing. “Okay, tell me… isn’t the bedroom gorgeous??”

“It’s beyond beeauuutifullll!!” She mocked at him when he appeared to bury himself inside the pillow.

“Do you mind if I take a quick nap?”

She marched upto him and held his arm to pull him, annoyed like a kitten who had just lost his prey. Pulling his hand, she threatened him, “I’ll push you in the canal outside!”

“Insteaddddd….” He dragged the word ‘instead’ for long… flirtatiously… seductively… and slowly…

She raised her brows in apprehension, almost sure what was coming next. He didn’t give her much time or chance to compose her action or think more. He simply tugged at her arm that held him, so that she lost her balance and staggered to fall over him.

“Instead… I have plans to pull you in…”


Tangles & Ties: 53: All of You!



143 Comments Add yours

  1. NandiniGupta10 says:

    Wow beautiful update dear…
    Your stories are magical 😍😘😘😍
    Everything is beautifully portrayed πŸ‘Œ
    🌻🌻 😍 🌻🌻
    🌻Love YOU🌻
    🌻🌻 🌹 🌻🌻

  2. Deepa says:

    Wow so beautiful moments mostly sab married couples ke sath aisa hota hai jab wo ghumne Jate hai I am enjoying this beautiful moments of manan

  3. crazyformanan says:

    Superb way of writing. On one point I support Nandini. Just changing location can’t be a holiday if you have to repeat all the household chores in place of roaming and enjoying.

  4. Nitu_nikku says:

    Wow…. Awesome chapter 

  5. ritu says:

    I am not able to read next part have u update it ?? neither i am able to get access to password protected page

  6. pixiepari says:

    it really looks like right out of  afairytale …i soo wish to go there

  7. piya66 says:

    Di mujhe aapke notification nhi mil r rhey h ☹️

    1. manitavb says:

      Have you subscribed by email?

    2. manitavb says:

      maybe you directly followed at wordpress. Some people who directly followed on wordpress, are not getting it

      1. piya66 says:

        Di mujhe bs tangle and ties book ke notification miltey h otherwise aapne Jo notice nd 2 book aur update krna start Kiya h uska nhi mila notification

      2. piya66 says:

        Di mujhe meri mail pr is book ka notification mil rha h

  8. Shanaya says:

    Loved it😍😍😍

    1. piya66 says:

      Di ne Abhi chapter 53 update nhi Kiya h na

  9. meghasrma says:

    Aww he is so cute😍😻

  10. Manvi Narang says:

    It’s sooo cute 😍

  11. sufi says:

    superb update…love it😍😍😍😍😍

  12. sumaia sara says:

    Manik know how to surprise his girl well I love the location he choose it fit for Nandini I guess πŸ˜‚

  13. Akshita says:

    Amazing. .fabulous update
    Loved it..

  14. shygal9 says:

    Wohooo..wat an amazing part..loved jealous Nandini..so cute she is.. can’t wait for next part..up update soon 😍

  15. Anonymous says:

    A lovely update .. I love there nok jok

  16. AanyaSharma says:

    I so wish to go to a place like this in future!!!!

  17. Prabha Returi says:

    Typical hubby material he is..and the parting line is Bang on….

  18. someone16sh says:

    No update ?

  19. pallu11 says:

    Wow it’s amazing. I liked the unique place . So thoughtful. ❀❀

  20. Anonymous says:

    Superb superb update loved it yar manik it’s so awesome nd nandini age so lovely nd super cute

  21. muskangarg309gmailcom says:

    No update?

  22. Sheetal says:

    Love the place . How did you find out about this .
    Lovely update

  23. Anonymous says:

    Wow, what a place.. Beautiful…

  24. ~Shiv~ says:

    I’m just way more curious to know the reason for chosen destination by you.. it’s beautiful ❀️

  25. a912212221 says:

    How i wish there were inline comments
    Missing them a lot
    Can’t wait for the next update
    Very desperate to read it

  26. Unnati Limbachiya says:

    Awesome superb dear speacgspee it so beautiful ND also I know about Netherland wow superb dear

  27. Kiran Malik says:

    How much I miss inline comments optionπŸ˜₯

    But anyways The jealousy part is so goodπŸ˜‚ that “Oh my god, you didint bring *her* along”πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    And manik is no lessπŸ™ˆ

    1. manitavb says:

      I miss the inline comments too… but what to do !

  28. mspagal says:

    You are update everyday it’s superb I want to read the story again so can you update remaining chapters here or Wattpad because I can’t see there

    1. manitavb says:

      I am updating 3 older parts every night.
      Thank you πŸ™‚

      1. mspagal says:


  29. Anonymous says:

    M in love with this chapter beautifully written ❀️

  30. Anonymous says:

    Thank you Di for taking efforts and writing daily for us ❀

  31. Shilpa says:

    It’s amazing again πŸ‘Œ

  32. KUDRAT says:

    Didi thank you so much for the update…
    Episode as usual πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
    Eagerly waiting for next…
    Didi mene phle bhi cmt kiaa lakin “data spam btataaa h….
    Orrr kae baar to Meri naam ki jgeh “antanomous….” Kuch esaa btataaa h..

    Nd Didi please don’t worry about the reply…
    I Love you 😘❀️
    Pray for your smile and health ❣️❀️

  33. KUDRAT says:

    Didi thank you so much for the update…
    Episode as usual πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
    EagrEag waiting for next…
    Nd pray for your smile nd health…

    Nd Didi please don’t worry about the reply…
    Love you 😘❀️
    Orrr mene herrr chapter m cmt kiaa …
    But kuch “antanomous….” K naam s aaya h…

  34. tanvijuneja98 says:

    I love the way u r writing this story. Much regards.

  35. Tarin001 says:

    It’s really good

  36. mysteryimp123 says:

    Lovely but jealous manik is also needed

  37. geeta15 says:

    Hahaha Manik is such a tease..
    Jealous nandu is too cute..
    Love their sweet banter πŸ€—πŸ€—
    That is so adorable to read 😍

  38. Sanskruti says:

    Manik is such a tease

  39. Shivaya says:

    Awww this was so cute but I totally agree with Nandini Manik was thoughtful but only about himself πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚jk I really want to see how Nandini enjoys now

  40. maniknandini1 says:

    Ohhh manik is such a tease.. I would like to see how Nandu will tease him.. 😜 loved the update.. Hope Nandu wouldn’t get disappointment as she don’t want to do all that choros .. But indeed it’s a beautiful place.. Loved the update😘 will wait for next ok.. And your highlighted line just took my heart.. ❀ stay blessed πŸ’«

  41. anujulle says:

    This is somewhat a different honeymoon destination as nandini said. .. Usually people choose hotels as it provide the much needed rest from daily house work.. I loved the place very much. . It is a peaceful place with lots of greenery around… Last pull from manik was awesome and hope to read their closeness one again. .. Images were once again beautifulπŸ˜πŸ’“πŸ˜˜πŸ’ž

    1. manitavb says:

      Thank you…
      I am in team Nandu too. Why work on a holiday? Right :)))

  42. khushboogupta01 says:

    I have a request so some more jealousy part bt the change is instead of nandu I want manik to be jealous and possessive ..btw that sarcasm we’re we favorite like really favorite they way you chose the line freaking amazing ❀️

  43. Anonymous says:

    I just loved this update….so freaking beautiful the destination is . I wrote entire journey so beautifully . Loved that. And manilma last statement . …it always so apt ….. Love Ya 😍❀️

  44. AMaNan says:

    I used to have a portrait of a beautiful place – misty mornings, lush green landscape, brick walls, bubbling streams, flowers… it’s hard to explain but this fairy tale land kind of reminded me of that. I really don’t know which place it was, but I’d cherished that fairy land till I had to move out to pursue my β€œadult life”. πŸ€·β€β™€οΈ This part brought back so many beautiful memories. ~big massive surge.<

    1. manitavb says:

      What a coincidence…I had a similar painting for a long time in my maternal home, and I grew up with fantasies woven around a cottage with a river flowing by, a bridge over the river leading to the house, bricked walls, colourful sky, setting sun and so many flowers on both sides of the stream.
      Even I felt nostalgic while writing this part as I googled for pictures of Giethoorn and loved each one of it…

      1. AMaNan's Fics says:

        It’s strange indeed! What if we had the same pic? I’d googled for it several times but never found it

        1. manitavb says:

          I thought the same while typing it…what if we had the same pic?
          Yes… I tried finding it too… Never got that peace in any pic… but got a strange satisfaction when I saw the cottage pictures of Giethoorn.

  45. AMaNan says:

    β€œInstead… I have plans to pull you in…”

    Where? Into the bed? Or into the canal? 😜

    1. Anonymous says:

      Of course bed πŸ˜…

  46. Shewani says:

    It’s going to be a teasing holiday.πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

  47. AMaNan says:

    β€œI didn’t even ask her. Sounds rude right? You are so correct. We could have brought her along!”


  48. Megha Soni says:

    Lovely 😍😍 choice of place
    And an amazing update of this lovely couple weeks

  49. Anonymous says:

    I love this blickering its fun to read

  50. Amela Khan says:

    Love this jealous nandini and he teasing her….beautifull cottage and lovely update ❀❀❀

  51. Part 52 – Very beautiful update. I actually got what will be their honeymoon for next ten days by seeing nandu’s reaction. LOL. It was funny and actually right that doing such works on holidays means nothing different from living their usual routine day to day work. I agree with her. He just chose cottage to get homemade food..? Seriously….lol…. But seriously manik doesn’t know what to do on holidays…?
    But the choice of cottage, place e everything was beautiful. It was really like what she dreamt of her fairytale. But poor she….her fairytale world crashed with thinking about doing works on honeymoon. But I am sure manik would have something different in his mind. He must have just teasing her, seeing her so annoyed on him.
    But seriously he so much enjoys to tease her and to irritate her.
    Loved their sarcasm witty fight. Who can say that he doesn’t like talking. Omg…she was so jealous that manki’s β€œshe” friend suggested him this cottage. That was so funny.
    β€œPull you in….” if he says β€œslipping” then he will be gone…lol…
    Overall I liked this part. Lets see how he calm her down and what else he will do to make her happy.

    Wattpad ID – Madhuri53

  52. azania25 says:

    Ending notes are beyond beautiful. Loved the way you end the chapter. Story line is simply amazing

  53. Anonymous says:

    I loved this… I have plans to pull you in…

  54. gursheen says:

    Damn!! I went into fits of laughter after reading their endless readings and bickerings. However, I know Manik will never let Nandini down chaye kuch bi ho. He is actually going out of his comfort zone to make her girl happy although he himself is not really sure about the idea of what an actual holiday is, he wants to give Nandini her fairytale honeymoon. I am thoroughly enjoying this phase of their relationship, discovering their feelings for each other.
    The entire honeymoon track is dragging me back to Sparks and spies days. The jealousy track is so much fun to read. I can literally imagine Parth and niti’s expressions in each and every scene and a big round of applause for creating such an exciting scenario and giving us such a deep insight in the most entertaining way. I’m so ecstatic to read the further updates. Thank you di. Update sooonnnnnnnnnnn.β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️β™₯️

    1. gursheen says:

      Spark and spice***

  55. dixitriddhi says:


  56. kshamaapurva says:

    Wow….daily updates. A real treat for us….

  57. Bhumika Bhandari says:

    Beautiful πŸ’―

  58. chandrasan says:

    Overall very cute update ❀ and the cottage is πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œso peaceful from daily chaos❀ these two gonna have lifetime experience and beautiful moments. Can’t wait to experience and read them as a regular reader!!! Lots of love di😘

  59. chandrasan says:

    What’s that he want to bring his friend to honeymoon making nandu jealousπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£ he is loves to see her getting irritated and angry acchha. Di now it’s manik’s turn, plz make him feel jealous too. I can’t forget that plane wala incident, a mere talk with a lady made him jealous what if nandini spoke with a guy, we want to see his expression and how he reactsπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ readers demand we want to see jealous manik plzzzz.

    1. manitavb says:

      Haha .. how can a honeymoon end without Manik getting jealous πŸ˜‹πŸ˜˜

      1. chandrasan says:

        Yayieee can’t wait now πŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒ

  60. chandrasan says:

    Though I loved the cottage but this guy is acting all smart 😝😝 they have came all the way to honeymoon but his concern is all about eating unhealthy food πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‚ bechari nandu has to do all the household work😜 oops how can I forget he is the cook 😍😍 now I can’t wait for kitchen romance πŸ™ŠπŸ™Š I know nandini will find a way and change his opinion about a proper holiday!!!!

    1. manitavb says:

      Let’s see who changes whom πŸ™ˆπŸ˜ƒ

  61. Heaven to hell says:

    Lovely place… And crazy couolc… They are perfect for eachother.. I am missing to do inline comments… And I am writing this comment 3rd time… Don’t know ehatsw the oeovlpr… Will be habitual with it with time…

    1. manitavb says:

      I’m sorry for all the trouble you guys are taking… thank you so much. It means a lot to me.

  62. chandrasan says:

    Where should I start from 😜 I never thought u could write an entire chap from their journey from boat to cottage. U amaze us by writing every little things ❀ which has so many meanings. Sply when manik was helping nandu to jump from the boat😍😍 loved every minute details. When she noticed his care ❀ the best thing is she knows mostly he express with actions. From initials days to now she always observe his action from taking care of her to making her feel proud❀❀ amazing!!!!

  63. Heaven to hell says:

    Wow.. beautiful city… I am missing inline comments.. I loved to do thay… And this couple… God… They are crazy… But perfect for rachoeach…

  64. Hmittal says:

    How much i love their teasing super duper update

  65. Anonymous says:

    Wow.. beautiful city… You have very good idea about all this… And lovely couple… Wohooo..

  66. Anonymous says:

    This place looks out of a fairy tale….but I do agree with Nandini…who wants to cook and clean on a holiday

  67. roselein mandala says:

    I have plans to pull in 😝😝.. Manita.. this is Mamatha .. mamrose2308 in wattpad

    1. manitavb says:

      Hello Mamatha… I remember wattpad ids… hence keep urging people to write them… but only you listened πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ you get hugs πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ’–πŸ’–

      1. roselein mandala says:

        Awwie.. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—β€οΈ

  68. anagha y says:

    Awesome update yaar loved it

  69. Rashmi Daga says:

    Loved the way…you describe each and every expression in detail. Now can’t wait for the next part. Yeh Dil maange more and more and more😍

  70. gauti reshsha says:

    This place really exists…Wow….What can I say…Loving them like mad…I mean the place n manan….So beautiful..I think at the end of their vacation their bonding would have become more beautiful…Love you for this awesome update….

  71. Priyanka Biswal says:

    Ohh wow what a place it is so seren nd beautiful loved it totally … love the couple more than anything else, they are changing ,change 4 the better, nd this holiday it makes them stronger emotionally nd physically too… loved the uodate didu…. so so happy to read a update in every day, cant tell u how much happy im..thankuuu 4 this😘😘😘

  72. Sahithi Reddy says:

    Amazing ❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

  73. stelitoes11 says:

    Awesome loved it β™₯️

  74. Momina Fayaz says:

    Beautiful place nd d update

  75. Himabindu says:

    Its us awesome….. I m very sure. :. By te end of ths trip all the equations between them would change

  76. Anonymous says:

    Loved the chapter 😍😍❀❀❀❀❀

  77. Anonymous says:

    Plz someome take me there 😍😍…i am just waitinggg now for next 😁

  78. Anonymous says:

    I really love the location wish I was there

  79. N says:

    i love them so much ❀️ your stories always have something authentic! kinda reminds me of s&s but these two are love & so are you ms. writer❀️

  80. MOHINI PATIL says:

    Thanks to manik he select this place, instead of normal destination, at least they will get privacy and can get to know each other more 😁ten days two of them alone isn’t it romanticπŸ’ 😍amazing update 😘day by day you are making me addicted to this story😊😊

  81. Anum says:

    Ufff these 2 r crazy and making me crazy to with them
    Such a beautiful place u selecte for manan honeymoon
    Love the update

  82. hinuthakkar11 says:

    This place is really beautiful dii😍😍😍i would seriously love to go there sometime🀩nd by seeing this beauty i would definitely plan a solo trip thereπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ
    Nd coming to update it was as always amazing😁jealous Nandu hayee it’s a treat to watch her like thisπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚nd cheery on the top her sarcasmπŸ˜‚β€οΈ
    Excited for more of their bickering,romance,nd many things🀩specially those which we can’t even imagine Manik doing exclusively for NanduπŸ˜‹

  83. poorni123 says:

    Awesome update !!! The trip is going to be excited and we too !!!

  84. Pooja says:

    You make us fall in love with Manan all over again ❀️

  85. tarana satwath says:

    Mujhe bhi jaana hai wahan. So beautiful the pics are and so is ur update.. seems teasing the hell out of her and making her blush are manik’s fav past time now a days..

  86. aditi1903 says:

    From the last n dis update m damn sure its gonna be a heck of lots of teasing romance n Wt not 😍😍😍 desperately luking forward to read more 😊😊😍 ur writings are love darling 😍😘❀❀❀

  87. Aastha Sondarva says:

    Aww!!! I am hell excited for their trip!!!!! I cannot wait to know what all will happen because this is just the beginning!!!!! Thank you for the amazing chapter!!!! Love you

  88. Aastha Sondarva says:

    Almost sure!! That does indicate that she has started knowing him and what he’ll be doing or saying!!! Duriyan nazdeekiyon main Badal Rahi hai!!!!

  89. Aastha Sondarva says:


  90. Aastha Sondarva says:

    You are playing with fire by irritating her!!!!!

  91. Aastha Sondarva says:

    U and your healthy food!!! Uff!! Off course you can’t compromise on your diet even if it’s meant for a few days!!!! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

  92. Aastha Sondarva says:

    Well Nandini too deserves a break na!!

  93. Aastha Sondarva says:

    Awww!! He is so open and honest!!!!

  94. Aastha Sondarva says:

    Well not sure if you’d always win mr Malhotra!! You still don’t know the hidden talents of Nandini!!!

  95. Aastha Sondarva says:

    Hehe!!! Jealous Nandu!!! I love it when her nose gets red with jealousy and she becomes extra sarcastic when she is jealous!!!!

  96. ineffablexx says:

    Ahhhh these updates just keep getting better and better! Your update timings are so on point I literally read it just before bed and it makes my day!!! This update is so cute and I honestly feel like I am more like Nandini in this case, I prefer hotels more as for me holidays means being super lazyyy ahaha…love you di xx

  97. Aastha Sondarva says:

    Ohhhhhh myyy godddd!!!! The cottage!!!! Looks like an exotic small villa!! I have always dreamer of going on a vacation somewhere where I get to live on a treehouse with beautiful scenery!!! And this is so similar to that!!!!😍😍😍😍

  98. Aastha Sondarva says:

    Hehehe!!! Expression of surprise!!! Teaching all the expressions!!! Off course she has taken do that obviously!!!!! Nandini nahi sikhayegi toh aur kon sikhayega???

  99. Aastha Sondarva says:

    Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!!! This place is so so so so so so so beautiful!!!! Wowwwwwwww😭😭😭😭😭😭

  100. Soo damn awesome…. they are such a beautiful couple.. they doesn’t fake things… they are soo real no fakeness nothing! They are truthful to eachither n that is enhancing their relationship

  101. Anonymous says:

    How beautiful their relstionship is… no fakeness… they are soo truthful to eachothed n thats the best thing about them😍😍😍

  102. piya66 says:

    It’s amazing and beautiful update di ❀️

  103. lovelyrashu says:

    Amazing update absolutely giving honeymoon feels. Feeling bad for manik that guy had really spent his years working at his office 😟. Absolutely loved manik teasing nandini about his friend πŸ˜‰. And it will be treat to read about them exploring, cooking and leading a domestic life away from office chaos and hospital tension. Waiting for next part 😊

  104. Sanjukta Chatterjee says:

    The teasing was beyond adorable. The place is so so beautiful. Would love to visit this place someday.

  105. myworld_myrulz says:

    Awww… How cute… This place is amazing.. I wish to see that frnd of his.. nice update..!!

  106. Anonymous says:

    Beautiful update

  107. Simran says:

    Every update of the story makes my mood jolly and the teasing session between them is so cute to watch and Nandini’s jealousy hayyee ❀ ❀

  108. Kml 14365 says:

    The way you potray the expression unsaid emotions its so beautiful i can legit imagine everything ❀❀

  109. mananaddict says:

    Hi I m your Wattpad reader

  110. Akhi says:


  111. Anonymous says:

    Amazing update.. ..

  112. Anonymous says:

    Wat a beautiful place!!

  113. arshina21 says:

    That’s a beautiful place and does it actually exist ?? πŸ™‚

    1. manitavb says:

      It does! It’s a real place in Netherlands and all these pictures are real. Google it πŸ™‚

      1. arshina21 says:

        Hey Doc, I tried commenting on 54 and 55 but im unable to. Its asking me to login when I’m already logged in πŸ˜‘
        So here it goes :54: I wonder how they switch moods so easily, I mean when I think they gonna start fighting, they end up teasing each other. They are so unpredictable πŸ˜„

        55: is it so difficult to fall in love doc ? I mean they know each other quite well, they even know their feelings for each other are genuine . Then whats stopping them ? The deal or the fear that the other doesn’t love him /her ?

        1. manitavb says:

          I’m sorry for all the trouble you guys are taking to be able to read and comment on the stories. I will try and make some changes in the settings to make it easy for you. Thank you so much.

          About your comment – No, it is not difficult to fall in love. They are already in love and they know it for themselves since they were in Bangalore. To confess the same to someone, needs courage and past experiences made it difficult for them to confess openly how much they love each other. Nandini almost said it that she likes him a lot!

    2. Simran says:

      Yes it actually exsist .. dude I’m researched about it coz Amsterdam is mine dream place to go and I researched about it and nearby places.

  114. Anonymous says:

    Lovely update😘😘😘

  115. christina sunny says:

    I just love the way you write di. The teasing session of manik and nandini is just soo interesting to read.. i just wait for you to uodate next so i can read it…. its so good.
    PS- I was ignored last timeπŸ˜…
    Just kidding😜

    1. manitavb says:

      No way… you can go back and check.. I have replied to you, today! Also, I remember that you were the first one to comment on last update and can also tell what you wrote – that how do I get these ideas. right??
      See!! I ignore no one :)))
      Lots of love πŸ™‚

      1. christina sunny says:

        Hehehehehe I didn’t notice… sorry diπŸ˜…πŸ˜…

  116. Anonymous says:

    Amazing update loved and enjoyed it fully …

    1. manitavb says:

      Thank you dear!

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