Beyond Every Border: Chapter 15: Right There!

Anshuman had his eyes fixed outside the window of the cab.

Kabul was like India. Four wheelers of all brands and makes, from most expensive high-end cars to the most ancient, vintage ones. The two-wheelers with drivers without a helmet, the disregard for traffic lights and the highly congested, snailing traffic reminded him of India.

The highway towards Jalalabad and this side of the Afghan landscape was no different than India. It appeared so familiar, once again. The deserted barren land till the eyes could see, with no plants or animals in sight for a long distance. The heat, the dust storms, the broken, half-constructed brick-walled houses, buildings torn by the war, the series of cliffs and sharp turns one after the other, the gravel on the damaged roads, ups and downs…

It was touted as the deadliest roads on the planet – He had been told again and again and again. But Anshuman was not worried about himself. His mind was pre-occupied with Manasvi’s thoughts. She was strong. He knew that. But that didn’t mean that she could be left alone to fight the harshest of circumstances. If only, he could have reached her before she left for this country and offered to be with her. Then, maybe, he wouldn’t be as anxious as he was, right now.

The cars zooming past each other at high speed, at every turn had the driver pressing brakes suddenly. Anshuman was jolted out of his thoughts. “Be careful!”

“Sorry sir, some drivers are very rash. Though all drivers this side are high on adrenaline, still some are saner than others. Not everyone wants to die.”

Anshuman just nodded. He was too tired and engrossed in his predicament to give a normal response to casual conversation.

“How much time more?” He asked.

“Half an hour, sir! The traffic is messy at this hour. Otherwise, we would have reached earlier.” The cabbie tried to be understanding and polite, looking at the messy state of his passenger.

The passenger buried his face in his palm for a moment and went back to his phone to try to call Manasvi again, hoping that she will call him. But he received no call. Her phone was not reachable, either.

He received a message each from Alex and Amanda both. They were boarding a plane to Kabul and were asked to join him at the camp near Jalalabad.

……………………..

Manasvi sat at the stairs of the Population Registration Office, Jalalabad, looking far away into the sky and all the buildings trying to reach above and touch it. For a long time, she sat there wondering how she would meet Anshuman.

Where was he, if he had come to Afghanistan? Madhu aunty had told her that he will come to Jalalabad, but where? Did someone guide him that she would be at this office at Jalalabad? Did he go to the MoI, Kabul?

Was he fine? Of course, he had to be…everything will be fine! God will be with him!

Her attention was diverted when Krish brought 2 paper-cups of coffee from the cafeteria of the office. He sat beside her on the stairs. She took the coffee from his hand.

“Not a big coffee shop. Just basics. Nothing great to eat. We will go inside the city and eat!” Krish informed.

“Where are we going?” She asked.

“They have called you tomorrow. So, we need to spend this day here. Let’s go to the city. Eat something and take rest!” Krish tapped his fingers over his coffee cup after taking a sip.

“Can we wait here for some time?” Manasvi asked in a low voice.

“Here?!” Krish was surprised but could understand her, “Listen, I know that you are worried about your husband and you are hoping that he will reach here. But the chances are very dull compared to the heat. It’s close to 50 degrees, Manasvi. There isn’t a proper place to sit here. We haven’t eaten anything and you are not even sure that he will come here or not.”

Manasvi lowered her eyes to let them stay on the froth over her coffee and bit her lip. She didn’t want to leave this place. She didn’t know why, but her heart said that Anshuman was going to come here. He was on his way.

Deep inside, she felt… hoped… wished…

Krish could feel her pain, but the inquisitive eyes of the locals upon them, seeing them together was getting uncomfortable. He turned his neck around and said, “Look at them. It seems someone is going to stop by and ask us a hundred questions!”

Manasvi squirmed and looked around. The locals were not modest to throw cursory glances. They had a determined look. Suspicious and curious.

She stood up, “Okay! Let’s go!”

“We’ll find a phone shop in the city and buy new phones. I think that must work. Our old phones are not being set to changed location.”

“Hmm!” She couldn’t decide if there was any merit in disagreeing or arguing with him.

She couldn’t drink her coffee. Her throat was too choked for that act. Quietly, she slipped her cup along with the coffee in the dust bin below the stairs and followed Krish.

……………………….

Anshuman quickly paid the driver and nearly ran towards the entrance of the PR office at Jalalabad. The security check at the entrance and then the stairs were crossed in a jiffy. His backpack was on his shoulder, repeatedly slipping away from his olive green, parachute, summer jacket, thrown over a black shirt and olive trousers, now dusty and messy after the travel.

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He enquired at 2 counters and very quickly, he got the information about Manasvi. It wasn’t usual for them to receive an application for a duplicate birth certificate from a Hindu girl, now living in India. It was a rare and curious case for the officials too.

“She left some time back. We’ve called her tomorrow.” The official on the desk informed him while 2 others collected around them, purely out of curiosity.

Anshuman heaved a sigh of relief. At least, she was fine and she was around. Somewhere near! He had no idea how to find her in this alien city. He’d have to wait till tomorrow, it appeared.

“Can you please do me a favour?” He requested, showed them his identity card given by PBB, Doctor’s permit and explained that he was here to serve their country and people. Right now, he was in search of his wife.

The officials suddenly turned very helpful, understanding and hospitable. They offered him tea and asked what they could do for him.

“Please, take my number. When she comes here tomorrow morning, please call me on this number and tell her that Dr. Anshuman is looking for her. Please ask her to wait here.”

So much for trying to remain somewhere around and not trying to meet her!! He thought. Right now, every moment was like a rock to be climbed by his tired body.

“Sir, our duties change by the roster and there will be another staff tomorrow. Still, we wil try to leave the message.” The staff assured her but his ray of hope dimmed further.

He walked out of the office of Population Registration and walked towards the long deserted street towards the city, emitting fire from the scorching sun above it.

‘Where do I find you in this big city?’

………………………………………

Manasvi didn’t want to have food while Krish was starving. They walked along the busy market street at the center of the city. He bought bananas and ate six of them, one after the other, offering one to Manasvi, every time he ate and was refused every time.

“I could never understand how giving up food solved all problems?” He tried to crack a joke.

Manasvi was not even listening to him. She kept walking ahead. Her mind was numb and heart slow at pace, not even registering every beat. She sighed. Her birthplace was right here and she felt as if she was in her parents’ arms. How her life had changed with the insurgency in Afghanistan and how she had eventually found a future for her was nothing less than a living nightmare.

The sun was about to set. Manasvi’s shoulders hurt. Her back hurt. Her eyes stung. She knew that it was all the effect of stress, exertion, fatigue, and sadness. She needed to sleep.

“Let’s go to that roadside shop near the police station,” Krish tried to divert her mind, “He is selling dates, nuts, and figs. You know they are a specialty of Afghanistan?”

She spoke dryly, “Are you here for shopping?”

Krish shrugged, “Of course, not…but what is the harm in shopping when you get quality goods for a bargain price?”

He walked ahead towards the shop. Manasvi was just not interested, but she followed him. Hardly few steps ahead across the road and they were shaken by a loud noise followed by chaos all around them.

There was smoke, people running all around, pushing each other, pushing Manasvi and Krish too, who fell down on the road.

Manasvi immediately squeezed her hands and folded her neck by instinct, or maybe by experience. By an unknown strength and sixth sense, as she had been in a situation like this before, she rolled to her side and tucked herself to the wall of a shop nearby. Krish suffered injuries as the moment he tried to stand, he was pushed by the crowd.

They could see nothing in the chaos and the commotion and a huge rush of people resembling a swarm of bees whose nest was just broken. Manasvi sat by the wall and shouted, “Krish, don’t try to get up. Roll down to one side.”

Krish had got up before that and he didn’t listen to her. This time, he was pushed to the edge of the shop and hit a pillar on his head, leading it to bleed.

The smoke and the dust mingled to obscure visibility and it became difficult to breathe. The situation was out of control as someone told them that a suicide attack had happened at the police station when a car bomb had exploded.

They were shoved towards a small lane which could take them out of the market area. Even this lane was congested, with hurt and injured people running in one direction. Away from this situation.

When they reached the other end of the road, they crossed the frenzied crowd, the bustling roads and went to the other side where the drivers were about to take their cabs away as the news of disturbance had spread. They quickly entered a cab.

“Sir, I’m going home. This cab is not free!” The driver was panic ridden too.

Manasvi, “We need urgent help. Please take us to the hospital. Quickly!”

As a rule, the Afghans talked to Krish and they didn’t directly talk to her. It happened the same even in case of an emergency.

“Which hospital, Sir?” The cabbie asked Krish.

“Any! We are new here… start driving and take us wherever you know we’ll get first aid and help.”

“But sir… I’m going home…I’m worried about my family!”

“Drop us at any hospital that comes on your way to your home,” Manasvi spoke again, even after being ignored.

The driver started driving at a rapid speed and took them out of the city and the noise. Krish noticed that they were on a deserted road with no habitation and they were probably moving out of the city.

Immediately, he raised an alarm, “Hello, where are we going?”

“Relax sir. There is a lot of tension going on in the city right now. I live in a nearby village. I’ll drop you to a good treatment center near that…”

“But…” Krish was extremely apprehensive.

Manasvi nodded to draw his attention and when he looked at her, she said in a low voice, “Generally locals, Afghan people take good care of their guests to the country from a foreign land and they are honest. Let us trust him.”

Krish nodded but stayed alert despite bleeding from the forehead and an arm. Manasvi was mildly hurt with just a few scratches and completely ignored that she was hurt too.

After almost 30 minutes, the driver stopped at a huge dilapidated building looking like a ruin from the war. It appeared like a castle with broken, damaged walls. It was surrounded by several white thick tents, giving it a look like a camp-like structure.

“Where are we?” Krish got down and scanned the area suspiciously. He was almost sure that they had been kidnapped.

The driver informed them, “It is a humanitarian camp by PBB. People Beyond Borders. There provide every facility for basic diagnosis and treatment. You will feel safe here. They are nice people… people like you who come from different countries to help us… I live in a village nearby…”

“PBB?” Krish was not sure that he really saw a PBB camp by his eyes. He had only heard about them till now, “Is it really PBB?”

“Yes, sir… I’ve brought patients here, before as well!” The driver shrugged, “They have very good doctors. From America. Europe etc.. okay… my work is done. I’ll take your leave!”

The driver left and Krish limped his way to the PBB camp in Jalalabad to find the first point of entry. He needed a serious attention right now. Manasvi helped him and left him inside the small room, which was turned into a makeshift dressing room cum minor OT. Manasvi was asked to wait outside.

Something about PBB made her uneasy. She observed the surroundings and walked around… till far, there were tents converted to examination rooms and several volunteers running around to help the patients. It didn’t take long to connect the dots.

Anshuman was a doctor too. He was talking about Syria and Israel. Did he work with PBB?

She had read about PBB a lot. They worked in severe conditions, with war and epidemic stricken nations, with everyone who needed their services without considering the borders.

Is it possible that he worked for PBB and was here? There is no harm in asking. Immediately, she ran towards the front desk which served as inquiry desk too. Her foot had been paining due to the scratches, her pale-blue full-sleeved dress was dusty and dirty and her body ached. But she had to go. She couldn’t wait.

She asked at the front desk, “Excuse me, is there any doctor by the name of Dr. Anshuman Singh Shekhawat in your team!”

She had expected it but was disappointed with the reply, “Yes, mam! We have Dr. Shekhawat here. He reached just an hour ago.”

Manasvi’s face was drawn as melancholy washed over it. She fought with all the crazy creases on her face. Her tears rolled down.

Her husband was definitely in the same country, same city, around her…  but he had come here for a PBB posting…  and not because he wanted to be with her!!

Her heart sank deeper in agony’s murk with a twang of pain stabbing through it. Her tongue ran over her lips. She didn’t know whether to be happy that he was here or to be sad that she had unknowingly, unintentionally built expectations from someone who didn’t belong to her. Something, she had always avoided.. like all feelings, this feeling too, hurt. And hurt deeply!

‘So what if he is here for PBB? Madhu aunty said that he was here and I could contact him whenever I want and he will join me.

He knows!!

He knows that I am here. He might be worried. Or he must have tried to find me. And even if it is just a hope… maybe he did nothing like that… even then, I’m satisfied that he is around me. He asked his mother to tell me that he will be there if I need him. What else do I want? He has always done so much for me. I shouldn’t build more expectations and weigh him down with my hopes.

I’ll watch him from far and won’t meet him. It’s enough that he is safe. He is with his people. He is happy! I’ll be happy for him…’

“Where is he right now?” Manasvi asked hopefully.

“One moment,” The lady at the desk walked out of it and said, “Come with me. I’ll show you his cabin…”

She pointed towards a few tents to the far edge of the entire camp. “Those last few tents…” and then she spotted him on the other side, somewhere far, standing at the edge of a cliff.

“Oh wait! There is Dr. Anshuman…”

“Where?” Manasvi immediately turned to look at him. Her heart suddenly kicked off the pace. Her lips trembled and she could feel her throat constricting.

So much for seeing him from far and being happy for him!! This didn’t sum up all the feelings inside her for him… this was not, how she felt about him…

She could recognise him even from behind. Indeed, he was Anshuman!! The lady pointed towards him smiled before leaving Manasvi there.

Manasvi couldn’t wait. Without thinking much, she made a dash towards Anshuman. He was standing with his face towards the valley and back towards Manasvi. Lost. Confused. Disappointed. And tired. Manasvi felt almost the same.

She reached him in few seconds and stopped right behind him. At almost five feet distance from him. Catching up for breath. Holding her body still.

The rustling of the sand and gravel below someone’s running feet diverted his attention. He turned around.

And the world almost stopped. Right there!!

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85 Comments Add yours

  1. Leena says:

    This update reminds me beautiful song from sathiya banjar hai sub banjar hai hum dhoondne jub firdose chale…😍

    1. manitavb says:

      Yeah, it was a lovely sequence.
      Few days back someone quote the title song of Dil se in reference to this story as Manisha wears the head scarf in the same way.
      There are few other songs too which have defined similar emotion in a heart touching way :))

  2. rajirath says:

    Tonight ?

    1. manitavb says:

      possibly… If I finish writing… thanks for the patience 🙂

  3. rajirath says:

    Hope you are doing well , Manita.

    1. manitavb says:

      Yes. I’m good. Thank you.
      I was very busy with a lot of things including relatives…
      Will update soon.

  4. Ann Aysh says:

    Oh my love mani… I am in so love with this story… Its beyond explainnable how much it touched my heart.. Some one should make a movie from this novel…. Its worth spending our quality time..

  5. Reshmi Kaul says:

    Can we get a update tonight?, 🥴

  6. Sangeeta says:

    some time back I used to get notification of these 2 stories in my mail id bt now I m not getting any notification there. what should I do?

  7. rajirath says:

    Can we get an update tmw as Ind day special Manita? 😁

    1. manitavb says:

      Hahaha.😂😂..
      Tomorrow is Rakhi too… I will have relatives at home… so I will try and write tonight or else… update on 16th

      1. rajirath says:

        Thank you. Appreciate it!

      2. someone16sh says:

        Please update atleast one small chapter ! 😁

      3. rajirath says:

        I was so eager that we were getting an update today.😪

  8. Leena says:

    This is most stressful chapter to read..u managed to take us to afaganistan..feel the temperature…rollercoster of emotions..I have never seen the character like anshuman and manasvi..pure soul. The emotional bond between them is strong …
    Its beautiful beautiful and beautiful…update

  9. Madhuri53 / Madhuri Kulkarni says:

    Part 15 –  Finally they meet. Thanks to that cab driver who left them at PBB camp. She doesn’t know that he came for her and all she did was thinking adversely about his intentions. Sad that she thought that he came for his duty and not for him. She was so hopeful within her heart and her mind chided her heart about being so anticipated about meeting her husband….and sad part was that it created more distance bet them. Still I am happy that at least they met. Why he didn’t tell his mother to give his phone no. to her. It would have been better and she might have called him earlier only. This communication gap increasing the distance bet them. She was so much happy and let her heart to build expectations that she forgot that he has a girlfriend. I liked how she instantly stopped her heart to think otherwise about him. Now how will things progress now when they met each other? Eager to read more. Update next part soon.

    Madhuri53

  10. Anonymous says:

    Want to write a lot more but I’m not great with words and that’s why despite having many story ideas I could never write a story and I just stopped myself from writing to you about my ideas and if it could be turned into a short story I didn’t want to offend a wonderful writer like u by my story ideas..ok now I’m blabbering a lot I’ll stop here but again I just love all your stories and would love to read all your previous non manan works too

  11. Anonymous says:

    This is an awesome update and a much awaited one
    I usually try to avoid intense emotional stories because this is escape from the daily stressful life so usually love to read light hearted stories and i actually didn’t read the starting couple of chapters of chapters as it was disturbing and stopped but revisited the story later and now am insanely addicted to this story and I don’t even hav eggs count of how many times I check the site for an update and Manita I don’t think a small post would be enough to express the beauty of your writing you are fabulous writer I always think of writing so much that when I start to pen down I fall short of words just love all your stories but this one has a special place..now I stopped myself a hundred times from asking u to update early since u are the only one among very few writers who update at a regular pace and u manage a lot of things in ur life that I’m super impressed that u have time and energy for so many things that U have become my inspiration and it’s wrong on my part to ask for another update after giving three back2back updates but despite all this I’m sorry I couldn’t stop myself from asking u for another update or atleast a teaser for the next one i literally was holding my breath by the end of the chapter it was like watching a thriller movie and not knowing what happens next and I forgot how many times I cried to sleep reading some chapters or how many times I kept thinking about the next scene how it would play out and everytime u came up with a chapter beyond the imagination and left me with a lot of emotions.when life throws hurdles at you or when emotionally drained with stressful things and life seems hard and you read such a story and know that there are people like Manasvi u want pull yourself up and move forward with strength and hope so Thanku for writing this story and am sorry for being desperate for another chapter and I understand if u cannot give an early update but just couldn’t stop myself from asking -loads of love didu
    Kuushi

  12. Chendubundu says:

    Absolutely damningly crazy good chapter. I hope there isn’t any misunderstanding now that they are face to face. But these guys don’t talk let alone communicate. But hopefully the agony both have on their eyes helps them understand what the other person went thru in the past couple of days

    1. manitavb says:

      Yes!! It is not necessary to speak when eyes communicate 🙂

  13. Anonymous says:

    Ohhh god how I m gonna survive till next update??😦😦😦😦

  14. Kalpana says:

    Awesome update. Finally like finally they met.

  15. lovelyrashu says:

    Damn, you are seriously testing our patience 😉 seriously I thought that they might come face to face in this one but now will have to wait for another update for
    their face off. Hope
    this meet will bring them close to each other and not make it more worse. Really feeling bad for manasvi hope her misunderstanding clears off that anshuman did came for her and not due to pbb as I have zero hope from anshuman for clearing her misunderstanding so I am leaving it on you😉. Waiting for krish and Amanda to see their chemistry or understanding or whatever it is so that they both will control their emotions instead of going with it in flow😉. And at last niti is getting engaged so waiting for your thought on it and did you shipped parth and niti together like ever? Please do reply whenever you read this one😊.

    1. manitavb says:

      I will definitely reply to this in detail tomorrow… 🙂

  16. Shivangi says:

    Damnnnnnnnnnn.. Don’t know what to say! You’re blessed with such good writing skills. I say this with every update, every day but this is true.

    I don’t think I’ll be able to wait for the next chapter now. I can’t. I can’t. I can’t. Please try to update that thodha jaldi na?

  17. Ray_Sam says:

    Amazing! Even the words got died to appreciate your skills🙂
    The chapters from every story. They’ve so pure and beautiful emotions stored in them, that we feel connected, though we’ve no connection. But it’s your skills who made it!
    Keep Righting and surprising us with every new update.

  18. chandrasan says:

    My hands are going to check the notification automatically 🙈 di u have spoiled us by giving daily updates 😍😂

    1. manitavb says:

      I was updating back to back as I was free and it was a weekend. I haven’t written the next part.
      So, I won’t be updating so soon 🙂

      1. chandrasan says:

        This explanation is enough di, take ur own time ❤ letting u know that we are damnnnnnn excited for next update 😍😍

  19. Anonymous says:

    Superb update

  20. Dhatri Pathak says:

    U r so amazing as writer.. whenever i tried reading stories which is not manan ff, I wasn’t able to read further than 2 chapters.. but m so involved in this story.. nd actually can feel each nd every emotions of mansvi nd anshumann..

  21. Dhatri Pathak says:

    Finally.. m having tears.. pls don’t create any misunderstandings now.. they deserves better ❤️

  22. hinuthakkar11 says:

    Yeyyyy finally they’re meeting🤩🤩i m soo excited for their meeting💃🏻can’t wait to read their reaction😍😍nd the last line always steals the show🤩❤️
    after exact 24 hours i m feeling good by reading this update nd finally smiling😄the whole chaos was too much to take in, now i m doing something good nd productive🙈nd finally i can sleep peacefully😁dii ur updates are my go to buddies which can change my mood instantly❤️

  23. shygal9 says:

    Why do I have tears in my eyes.. Can feel you manasvi❤..

  24. someone16sh says:

    Cliff hanger 😛😛

  25. Madhuri Wadhwani says:

    What a way to end😜

    1. M says:

      Loved this story even more than the Tangles & Ties…. The silent communication the serious calm approach… wow… Kudos girls…Keep going..Keep going…

  26. Uma Maheswari says:

    Wow yaar, I feel like watching a movie. Literally I could feel the tension and anxiety of both Manasvi and Anshuman

  27. Apurva says:

    I just hope no misunderstanding……he is there for her. HOPE……..be positive. Consoling myself 😉. Dr. You are awesome. Just don’t want to wait more. Hope to get next update soon….

  28. krinal310 says:

    I don’t have any words to describe how much I loved this update .goshhhhh they are here, in front of each other…. yeyyyyy

  29. Prabha Returi says:

    Hi Manita! Couldn’t comment on last two updates, but I wanted to take time and write today.Can’t wait for the next update. I am dying to read the rollercoaster of their emotions and I sure you will pen them down in the most beautiful way. I feel bad for Manasvi’s thought process but can’t blame her as she is influenced by the “girlfriend ” and their impending divorce . Just want them to sort their feelings ” Beyond the Borders” and get back together, coz they are deemed to be together.

    1. Anonymous says:

      Second you 🤗🤗🤗

  30. Priya says:

    What a note you had to end di…They should Chuck all their inhibitions and just hug each other….Too much time they were away from each other..Enough of it…This story makes me so emotional..I can feel what they feel….Goosebumps all over…

  31. Divya Preet says:

    This story gives me an emotional high. So much longing and distant love which these both have to realise.
    Can’t wait for what happens next

  32. Divya Preet says:

    This story gives me an emotional high. So much longing and distant love which these both have to realise.
    Can’t wait for the next update.

  33. Simran says:

    Please post the next chapter as soon as possible…..just can’t wait…..loving it right now

  34. Anusha says:

    I just want them to hug each other tightly…. He came to Afghan for her but she didn’t know… She was searching for him but he didn’t know… Actually their story is quite complicated… I think she will consider Amanda as his gf… Waiting eagerly for the next update

  35. Keyura says:

    Doc! Seriously I could feel it happening…every time I read your story I could visualise it …my day starts with reading your writings be it the previous parts or newly updated ones…thank you so much for writing such beautiful stories

  36. Sanjukta Chatterjee says:

    Thank you Doc! 🤗😘❤️

  37. Yogita says:

    Plz di aese point pe la ke mat chod do.! Plz update soon! Plz

  38. ekta Semwal says:

    Oh god.. I could really feel what Manasvi and Ansuman must be feeling… And what those five feet distance meant.. I so wish Anshuman give a tight hug to Manasvi make them free from pain .. and why not when there are so many Anshuman’s first time with Manasvi..
    Beautiful writing 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

  39. Anonymous says:

    Oh god.. I could really feel what Manasvi and Ansuman must be feeling… And what those five feet distance meant.. I so wish Anshuman give a tight hug to Manasvi make them free from pain .. and why not when there are so many Anshuman’s first time with Manasvi..
    Beautiful writing 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

  40. Ng says:

    please update the next chapter soon!!!!!!

  41. chandrasan says:

    Suicide attack 😳😳am afraid hope they both are safe along with krish and everyone 🤞

  42. chandrasan says:

    Ur writing felt like I was watching a movie climax 😍😍❤❤ everything is running inside our mind!! Ufff and at the last when they met, parth and niti in front of my eyes and the word stopped 😍😭❤❤ my ManAn ❣❣ they deserve happiness😭

    1. chandrasan says:

      World*

  43. chandrasan says:

    I am so anxious right now!!! She assumed he was here for camp not for her 😒😒someone tell her that he was there for her 😭😭 only for her he swapped and got leave which he hadnt done before!!!!

  44. chandrasan says:

    Damn this was so emotional 😭😭 Manasvi my poor baby have to go through so many things!!! I want to give her a tight hug and want to take away all her pain ❤❤ Her longing to see him just once at a distance😭😭

  45. Rajini says:

    Ur too good at writing and I mean u know how to make the readers happy and I so love your work update the next part soon please ♥️

  46. Rajini says:

    Damn what a update please update the next part soon please ♥️

  47. pixiepari says:

    can we have another update soon pleaseeeee !!!!! it always happens like this…i feel so happy seeing your update but so sad as soon as it ends…i know i am stupid but kya karoon aapki stories hain hi aisa…i feel like to collect all of them and pass them onto next generations to amke them realise the value of life and how we all are so privileged

  48. Heaven to hell says:

    Misunderstandings…. Need to resolve it soon… Quickly…

  49. Shewani says:

    You made me cry. 😭😭😭. Such a poor soul she is. Carving for some love and attention from somebody to share her feelings.
    I can clearly relate myself with her. Many people are in this world, among so many people,she cannot call not a single person as hers. Same thing that’s happening to me as well.😞😞😞

  50. Srabana Maiti says:

    BEAUTIFUL!!! That longing, that wait was portrayed so beautifully <3 <3
    Also, please do update Twisted Minds. I have been missing Rudra and Mrinalini :')
    But thank you so much for writing such beautiful stories. Your updates make my day 😀

  51. Shruti says:

    I have never commented on any story asking writer to update soon, because I know they have their personal life too which they can’t compromise and writing is an art not a job which one does everyday, hence can’t be forced or scheduled. But this story had my heart since beginning due sheer it’s beauty and brilliance, so for the first time I am asking you, please update soon miss writer, the wait is killing me though I just completed reading the story just 5 minutes ago😁.

  52. rajirath says:

    You made me cry Manita. Such is the power of your words. Can’t wait to see how both react next.

  53. Lavina Dsouza says:

    Oh God, they are meeting. I could literally feel their pain and helplessness when they were searching for each other…. Too good Doc. I can’t wait for the next update…

  54. Neha says:

    I am so intrigued by this story that I keep checking my email for any updates and u gave 3 updates in 3 days. I am so happy that finally they have met and really curious to know about what is going to happen next. Your writing is just fabulous.
    Plz try to update next chapter soon.

  55. Anonymous says:

    ❤️❤️ this story is loveee

  56. Surerayna says:

    ❤️❤️❤️❤️ can’t wait for next update…..

  57. MaryaanQ says:

    And I die coz I’ll hold my breath until the next chapter 🤭

  58. Tanvie says:

    Can’t wait now pleaseeeeeee di, pleaseee update soon. I know you have already updated three parts of it. But show some mercy💔… It’s just so beautiful ❤❤❤❤

  59. Mspagal says:

    Hayee finally they met and it’s superb one

    1. Pavani says:

      Thank u so much for updating today di I didn’t expected an update today since you already posted 2 parts .i felt so happy when I found the update . This update is so amazing😍😃.

  60. Ruchi Garg says:

    Oh no… But why you stop writing… It as if you take us to the cliff and left there

  61. Anonymous says:

    You have to stop ‘Right There’ na!
    The update was beautiful as usual. I am more anxious than ManAn. Waiting for next episode.
    Mercy

    1. maniknandini1 says:

      Morning with my favorite story update and a cup of tea just make my whole day. 💞
      Thank you soo much Di for this update. It was worth both of them have been struggling to get to each other. Hope now they will get some time together. And Anshuman should say her the truth that he came for her not for camping. Please I know it will be so much to ask but will you please update next one early Di? 🥺 I didn’t even get to know when the update get finished.
      Eagerly waiting for their talk..
      Stay bless 💫

  62. Dulcie says:

    Wow thanks for such an awesome update. Cant wait for the next one

    1. KUDRAT says:

      Didi thank you
      Thank you so much!
      😍❤️😘

  63. Pooja says:

    My heart was beating so hard and mentally praying that they meet.. for a moment I just wanted to scroll down and check if they meet but I didn’t since I wanted to thoroughly enjoy it.. and awwwww it was WORTH.. they met 😭😭😭 can Anshuman plssss her know that he is there for her and not becoz of the camp .. I know he won’t ☹️

    I am so so excited for next chapter now.. I have this constant smile on my face while writing this.. that’s how ManAn have become part of our life now ❤️

    1. Pooja says:

      I am very much excited also becoz we wil get to know Anshuman now.. I know manasvi had to face a lot and we have an idea of her struggles.. but now since u r gonna unmask different layers of Anshuman I am even more excited .. we might see him slowly opening up to manasvi ..

      Hayeeee there is so much to say.. but not getting words to express here.. thanks Manita.. thank you so much for sharing such beautiful stories which completes our day💕💕

  64. Susiisami says:

    You just made my morning… What a pleasant surprise… at last… Thank you for letting them meet… Now i can’t wait to see their next emotion with the unexpected reunion..

  65. Salriz says:

    Oh my god IV got no words to explain how I am feeling after reading this update my heart is beating so fast n IV got a huge amount smile on my face of it possible can we have a update tomorrow please now I can’t wait wat will happen next ❤️

  66. Bidisha Mohanty says:

    There’s this huge,huge smile on my face which am sure is got going anywhere any soon. Situations are definitely difficult and tiring but the efforts from both of them just makes the pain worth it.Can’t wait for the next update.The greedy me is expecting an update tomorrow.

  67. Bindu says:

    Thanks so much for writing such a beautiful story Manita😍😍

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